[gnome-user-docs] clock candidates

[Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>]

commit c3b100e2479657064e858b5845408863d8cef697
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Sat Oct 1 17:30:53 2011 -0400

    clock candidates

 gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page |   58 +++++++++++++++++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |   34 +++++++++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |   13 ++++++--
 gnome-help/C/clock.page          |    2 +
 4 files changed, 77 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
index c6f8910..66b0e4a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-calendar.page
@@ -8,6 +8,8 @@
     
     <desc>Display your appointments on the calendar at the top of the screen.</desc>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-01" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -16,31 +18,49 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Calendar appointments</title>
+ <title>Calendar appointments</title>
   
-<note>
-<p>This requires <app>Evolution</app> to be installed in your computer.</p> 
-<p>Most distros have come with <app>Evolution</app> installed by default.  If yours does not, you may need to install it using your distros package manager.</p>
-</note>
-<p>To view your appointments:</p>
+ <note>
+  <p>This requires <app>Evolution</app> to be installed on your computer.</p> 
+  <p>Most distros come with <app>Evolution</app> installed by default.  If yours
+  does not, you may need to install it using your distro's package manager.</p>
+ </note>
+
+  <p>To view your appointments:</p>
   <steps> 
-    <item><p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
-</item>
-    <item><p>Click the date for which you want to see your appointments on the <gui>Calendar</gui>.</p></item>
-    <item><p> The calendar will display existing appointments on the right. As appointments are added in <app>Evolution</app>, they will appear in the clock's appointment list.</p></item>
+   <item>
+    <p>Click on the clock on the top bar.</p>
+   </item>
+   <item>
+    <p>Click the date for which you want to see your appointments on the
+    <gui>Calendar</gui>.</p>
+   </item>
+   <item>
+    <p>Existing appointments will display on the right. As appointments are
+    added in <app>Evolution</app>, they will appear in the clock's appointment
+    list.</p>
+   </item>
   </steps>
 
-<p>To quickly get to the full <app>Evolution</app> calendar, click on the clock and click <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
-
-<media type="image" src="figures/shell-appts.png"
-       width="500" height="282">
+ <media type="image" src="figures/shell-appts.png" width="500" height="282">
   <p>Clock, calendar, and appointments</p>
-</media>
+ </media>
 
-<note><p>This will work only if you have an existing <app>Evolution</app> account. Otherwise, a window will appear with the necessary steps for adding your first account.</p></note>
+  <p>To quickly get to the full <app>Evolution</app> calendar, click on the
+ clock and click <gui>Open Calendar</gui>.</p>
 
-<comment>
+ <note>
+  <p>This will work only if you have an existing <app>Evolution</app> account.
+  Otherwise, a window will appear with the necessary steps for adding your first
+  account.</p>
+ </note>
+
+ <comment>
     <cite date="2011-02-10" href="mailto:nruz alumnos inf utfsm cl">Natalia Ruz</cite>
-    <p>Should have some information or link to "how to add a mail account to Evolution", and possibly an image (but maybe a screenshot is too big).</p>
-  </comment>
+    <p>Should have some information or link to "how to add a mail account to
+    Evolution", and possibly an image (but maybe a screenshot is too big).</p>
+    <cite date="2011-10-01" href="mailto:mdhillca gmail com">mdhill</cite>
+    <p>Link to app-evolution-setup.page.stub.</p>
+ </comment>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 8d0ea01..3eae441 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -4,7 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
-    <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> to alter the date/time.</desc>
+    <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>
+    to alter the date/time.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-01" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -12,20 +14,36 @@
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
+
 <title>Change the date and time</title>
 
-<p>If the date and time displayed on the top bar are incorrect or in the wrong format, you can change them:</p>
+  <p>If the date and time displayed on the top bar are incorrect or in the wrong
+ format, you can change them:</p>
 
 <steps>
- <item><p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year, day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p></item>
  <item>
-  <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by switching <gui>Network Time</gui> on.</p>
-  <p>When <em>Network Time</em> is switched on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p>
+  <p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select
+  <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
+  <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year,
+  day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by
+  switching <gui>Network Time</gui> on.</p>
+  <p>When <em>Network Time</em> is switched on, the computer will periodically
+  synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't
+  have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the
+  internet.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by switching the 24-hour format on or off.</p>
+  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by switching the 24-hour
+  format on or off.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index 8303998..5eb65f8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -5,6 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
     <desc>Add other timezones so you can see what time it is in other cities.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-01" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,13 +15,19 @@
   </info>
 
 <title>Change your timezone</title>
+
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-<item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Click on your the location on the map, then select your current city from the drop-down list.</p></item>
+  <item><p>You may need to click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the
+  <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click on your the location on the map, then select your current city
+  from the drop-down list.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>The time shown on the top bar will update automatically when you select a different location.  The time in the window will be updated next time you access the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> window.  You may also wish to <link xref="clock-set">set the clock manually</link>.</p>
+  <p>The time shown on the top bar will update automatically when you select a
+ different location.  The time in the window will be updated next time you
+ access the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> window.  You may also wish to
+ <link xref="clock-set">set the clock manually</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock.page b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
index ad35a08..6133fd8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock.page
@@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
       <link xref="clock-calendar">calendar and appointments</link>...
     </desc>
  
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-10-01" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>