[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 51/55] docs: revised radio-stations-listen and radio-what-is for clarity

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 51713e4931a08b1d235753cd224c7896edfa2225
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sat Dec 15 14:51:09 2012 -0600

    docs: revised radio-stations-listen and radio-what-is for clarity

 help/C/radio-stations-listen.page |    7 ++++---
 help/C/radio-what-is.page         |    8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
index ee55d9c..46d36db 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
@@ -28,9 +28,10 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>
-        Before you can start listening to the radio station, <app>Rhythmbox</app> needs
-        to download from the Internet the audio stream. The time taken to download that
-        audio stream depends on your Internet connection.
+        Before you can start listening to the radio station, <app>Rhythmbox
+        </app> needs to download the audio stream from the Internet. This is 
+        called <em>buffering</em>. The time it takes to buffer the audio 
+        stream depends on the speed of your Internet connection.
       </p>
     </item>
   </steps>
diff --git a/help/C/radio-what-is.page b/help/C/radio-what-is.page
index e86f785..93398b2 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-what-is.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-what-is.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="radio-stations" group="two"/>
     <desc>What is an internet radio station?</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.8" date="2012-09-15" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.8" date="2012-12-15" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
       <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
      
   <p>Internet radio stations are similar to regular radio stations, but the 
   music is streamed to your computer through a network rather than over the 
-  air. Internet radio stations can be a simultaneous stream of a regular radio 
-  station, an amateur broadcasting their own station, or commercial
-  internet radio stations that include live DJs and even commercials.</p>
+  air. Internet radio stations can be a stream of a regular radio station, an
+  amateur broadcasting their own station, or commercial internet radio stations
+  that include live DJs and even commercials.</p>
 
 </page>