[gnome-user-docs] Review lock-display-fuzzy for 3.14

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 20a8720068d67a9e67891693191dea5266cb220f
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 22 11:06:02 2014 +0100

    Review lock-display-fuzzy for 3.14
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=737070

 gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page |   76 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 46 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
index 0f11034..eb0a4f6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/look-display-fuzzy.page
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
       id="look-display-fuzzy">
 
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
-   <desc>The screen resolution may be set incorrectly.</desc>
+    <link type="guide" xref="hardware-problems-graphics"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-09" status="candidate"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-10-11" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-22" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -30,18 +30,21 @@
       <name>Shobha Tyagi</name>
       <email>tyagishobha gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>The screen resolution may be set incorrectly.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Why do things look fuzzy/pixelated on my screen?</title>
 
-<p>This can happen because the display resolution that you have set it is not the right one for your 
screen.</p>
+<p>This can happen because the display resolution that you have set it is not
+the right one for your screen.</p>
 
 <p>To solve this, open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui>
 overview and start typing <gui>Displays</gui>. Click on <gui>Displays</gui>
-to open the panel. Try some of the <gui>Resolution</gui> options and set the one
-that makes the screen look better.</p>
-
+to open the panel. Try some of the <gui>Resolution</gui> options and set the
+one that makes the screen look better.</p>
 
 <comment>
   <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -51,30 +54,43 @@ that makes the screen look better.</p>
 </comment>
 
 <section id="multihead">
- <title>When multiple displays are connected</title>
-
- <p>If you have two displays connected to the computer (for example, a normal monitor and a projector), the 
displays might have different resolutions. However, the computer's graphics card can only display the screen 
in one resolution at a time, so at least one of the displays might look fuzzy.</p>
-
- <p>You can set it so that the two displays have different resolutions, but you won't be able to display the 
same thing on both screens simultaneously. In effect, you will have two independent screens connected at the 
same time. You can move windows from one screen to another, but you can't show the same window on both 
screens at once.</p>
-
- <p>To set up the displays so that they each have their own resolution:</p>
-
- <steps>
-  <item>
-    <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
-    start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open panel.</p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-   <p>Uncheck <gui>Mirror Displays</gui>.</p>
-  </item>
-
-  <item>
-   <p>Select each display in turn from the gray box at the top of the <gui>Displays</gui> window. Change the 
<gui>Resolution</gui> until that display looks right.</p>
-  </item>
- </steps>
+  <title>When multiple displays are connected</title>
+
+  <p>If you have two displays connected to the computer (for example, a normal
+  monitor and a projector), the displays might have different resolutions.
+  However, the computer's graphics card can only display the screen in one
+  resolution at a time, so at least one of the displays might look fuzzy.</p>
+
+  <p>You can set it so that the two displays have different resolutions, but
+  you will not be able to display the same thing on both screens
+  simultaneously. In effect, you will have two independent screens connected at
+  the same time. You can move windows from one screen to another, but you
+  cannot show the same window on both screens at once.</p>
+
+  <p>To set up the displays so that they each have their own resolution:</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Displays</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Displays</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The displays should be listed as <gui>Mirrored</gui>. Select your main
+      display.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <gui>Primary</gui> in the list of display configurations, and
+      then click <gui style="button">Apply</gui> to save.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select each display in turn from the gray box at the top of the
+      <gui>Displays</gui> window. Change the <gui>Resolution</gui> until that
+      display looks right.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
 </section>