[gimp-web/testing] Minor grammatical and formatting changes to LGM announcement



commit 53d21c77f5a91c0cc416923e07b6c418f6165704
Author: Pat David <patdavid gmail com>
Date:   Thu Dec 3 14:15:43 2015 -0600

    Minor grammatical and formatting changes to LGM announcement

 .../news/2015-12-03 LGM2016 Participation Call.md  |   15 ++++++++++-----
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/content/news/2015-12-03 LGM2016 Participation Call.md b/content/news/2015-12-03 LGM2016 
Participation Call.md
index dc0f169..658703c 100644
--- a/content/news/2015-12-03 LGM2016 Participation Call.md     
+++ b/content/news/2015-12-03 LGM2016 Participation Call.md     
@@ -5,14 +5,19 @@ Authors: Alexandre Prokoudine
 Slug: lgm-2016-call-for-participation
 Summary: On April 15—18, Libre Graphics Meeting 2016 conference is taking place in London. We invite you to 
attend it and meet developers of free graphics software, lead a workshop or participate in one.
 
-On April 15—18, [Libre Graphics Meeting 2016](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/) conference is taking 
place in London. We invite you to attend it and meet developers of free graphics software, lead a workshop or 
participate in one.
+On April 15—18, the [Libre Graphics Meeting 2016](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/) conference is 
taking place in London. 
+We invite you to attend and meet developers of free graphics software, lead a workshop, or participate in 
one.
 
-The GIMP team and Libre Graphics Meeting go way back. In 2005, annual meetings of GIMP developers branched 
out to a new conference that embraced developers of free software, graphic and type designers, photographers, 
and 3D artists. That conference was LGM.
+The GIMP team and Libre Graphics Meeting (LGM) go way back. 
+In 2005, annual meetings of GIMP developers branched out to a new conference that embraced developers of 
free software, graphic and type designers, photographers, and 3D artists. That conference was LGM.
 
 Ever since then we attend the event every year to hold project meetings, talk to fellow developers from 
other libre projects, and get inspired by the work that you, our end-users, present.
 
-If you are a GIMP user with outstanding skills in graphic design, painting, illustration, or photography, we 
encourage you to attend LGM 2016 and do a GIMP workshop. Please use [this submission 
form](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/submit-proposal/) to send a proposal. Submission deadline is 
January 10.
+If you are a GIMP user with outstanding skills in graphic design, painting, illustration, or photography, we 
encourage you to attend LGM 2016 and do a GIMP workshop. 
+Please use [this submission form](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/submit-proposal/) to send a proposal. 
+Submission deadline is **January 10, 2016**.
 
-There are, of course, more formats of active participation: longer and shorter talks, hackathons, Bird Of a 
Feather meetings etc. You can learn more about those from the [press 
release](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/call-for-participation/).
+There are, of course, more formats for active participation: longer and shorter talks, hackathons, Bird of a 
Feather meetings, etc. 
+You can learn more about those from the [press 
release](http://libregraphicsmeeting.org/2016/call-for-participation/).
 
-We'll be excited to meet you in person!
\ No newline at end of file
+We'll be excited to meet you in person!


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