Small patch for gdp-handbook

[Christian Egli <christian egli stest ch>]

While reading the gdp-handbook I found a few what I belive to be
errors. 

Basically the fixes are as follows:

* s/This/Those/
* the source code for ulink did not match what it was supposed to
  produce.
* s/GNOME Workshop/GNOME Office
* fix a problem with punctiation

Of course there are probably more problems especially when it talks
about GNOME 2.0. I believe some of those things have been adressed
with GNOME 1.4. But I'm not sure enough to create a patch :-(.

Also I noticed that there were some spelling problems in
gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata. 

Attached are two patches:

Index: gdp-handbook.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-docu/gdp/gdp-handbook.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.71
diff -u -r1.71 gdp-handbook.sgml
--- gdp-handbook.sgml	2000/12/03 08:43:57	1.71
+++ gdp-handbook.sgml	2001/04/30 18:13:48
@@ -1493,7 +1493,7 @@
   <listitem>
     <para>
       <guilabel>Show hidden files</guilabel> &mdash; This will
-      show all "dot files" or files that begin with a dot.  This
+      show all "dot files" or files that begin with a dot.  Those
       files typically include configuration files and directories.
     </para>
   </listitem>
@@ -1523,7 +1523,7 @@
 		    <para>
 		      <guilabel>Show hidden files</guilabel> &mdash;
 		      This will show all "dot files" or files that
-		      begin with a dot.  This files typically include
+		      begin with a dot.  Those files typically include
 		      configuration files and directories.
 		    </para>
 		  </listitem>
@@ -1719,11 +1719,11 @@
           Web page or a local file, use <sgmltag>&lt;ulink></sgmltag>
           tag, for example:
           <programlisting>
-<![CDATA[ To find more about GNOME, please visit <ulink type="http"
-url="http://www.gnome.org";>GNOME Web page</ulink> ]]>
+<![CDATA[ To find more about GNOME, please visit the <ulink type="http"
+url="http://www.gnome.org";>GNOME Web Site</ulink> ]]>
           </programlisting>
-          which produces:  To find more about GNOME, please visit
-          <ulink type="http" url="http://www.gnome.org";>The GNOME Web
+          which produces:  To find more about GNOME, please visit the
+          <ulink type="http" url="http://www.gnome.org";>GNOME Web
           Site</ulink> You can use any of the standard URL types, such
           as <literal>http, ftp, file, telnet, mailto</literal> (in
           most cases, however, use of <literal>mailto</literal> is
@@ -2020,7 +2020,7 @@
     <note>
       <title>Manuals For Large Applications</title>
       <para>
-        Manuals for very large applications, such as GNOME Workshop
+        Manuals for very large applications, such as GNOME Office
         components should be a <sgmltag>&lt;book></sgmltag> (and thus
         use <sgmltag>&lt;chapter></sgmltag> for each primary section)
         , instead of <sgmltag>&lt;article></sgmltag> which most
@@ -2144,9 +2144,9 @@
     </note>
     <para>
       Most GNOME applications will have <guibutton>Help</guibutton>
-      buttons.  These are most often seen in Preference windows. (All
+      buttons.  These are most often seen in Preference windows (all
       Preference windows should have <guibutton>Help</guibutton>
-      buttons.) Most <guibutton>Help</guibutton> buttons will connect
+      buttons). Most <guibutton>Help</guibutton> buttons will connect
       to the application manual, although some may connect to special
       documents.  Because the <guibutton>Help</guibutton> buttons do
       not generally have their own special documentation, the


Index: templates/gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvs/gnome/gnome-docu/gdp/templates/gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata,v
retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.18 gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata
--- templates/gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata	2001/04/23 16:29:22	1.18
+++ templates/gnome-app-template.sgml.cdata	2001/04/30 18:19:14
@@ -193,9 +193,9 @@
 
 
  <!-- For this app, one could put "proving" or "edit" (probably even
-      both of them) as sect2's seperate from the main window
+      both of them) as sect2's separate from the main window
       section. Since they were both so closely involved with the main
-      window, I decided to have them as sect3's isntead. Judgement
+      window, I decided to have them as sect3's instead. Judgment
       call. -->
 
       <sect3 id="proving">
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@
    <!-- You might want to include a note, warning, or tip, e.g. -->
 	
 	<warning>
-	  <title>Proving Incorrect Theorms</title>
+	  <title>Proving Incorrect Theorems</title>
 	  <para>
             <application>MY-GNOME-APP</application> cannot prove
             incorrect theorems. If the theorem you have entered is not
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@
 	    <term>Open</term>
 	    <listitem>
 	      <para>
-                 Open an exisiting theorem you want to prove, or a
+                 Open an existing theorem you want to prove, or a
                  completed proof you wish to print or format.
                </para>
 	    </listitem>

-- 
Christian Egli
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