pygtk-docs r803 - trunk/2.0/tut

[esr svn gnome org]

Author: esr
Date: Tue Oct 21 23:26:18 2008
New Revision: 803
URL: http://svn.gnome.org/viewvc/pygtk-docs?rev=803&view=rev

Log:
Minor wordsmiting for better continuity with previous section.


Modified:
   trunk/2.0/tut/PackingWidgets.xml

Modified: trunk/2.0/tut/PackingWidgets.xml
==============================================================================
--- trunk/2.0/tut/PackingWidgets.xml	(original)
+++ trunk/2.0/tut/PackingWidgets.xml	Tue Oct 21 23:26:18 2008
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
     <sect1 id="sec-DetailsOfBoxes">
       <title>Details of Boxes</title>
 
-      <para>Because of this flexibility, packing boxes in GTK can be
+      <para>Because of all this flexibility, packing boxes in GTK can be
 confusing at first. There are a lot of options, and it's not immediately
 obvious how they all fit together. In the end, however, there are basically
 five different styles. <xref linkend="packbox1fig"/> illustrates the result
@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@
 packed. The objects will all be buttons for now, so we'll be packing buttons
 into boxes.</para>
 
-      <para>The <parameter>expand</parameter> argument to
+      <para>As previously noted, the <parameter>expand</parameter> argument to
 <methodname>pack_start</methodname>() and
 <methodname>pack_end</methodname>() controls whether the widgets are laid
 out in the box to fill in all the extra space in the box so the box is
@@ -167,10 +167,11 @@
 <methodname>pack_start</methodname>() or
 <methodname>pack_end</methodname>().</para>
 
-      <para>The <parameter>fill</parameter> argument to the pack methods
-control whether the extra space is allocated to the objects themselves
-(<literal>True</literal>), or as extra padding in the box around these
-objects (<literal>False</literal>). It only has an effect if the expand
+      <para>As previously noted, the <parameter>fill</parameter>
+argument to the pack methods control whether the extra space is
+allocated to the objects themselves (<literal>True</literal>), or as
+extra padding in the box around these objects
+(<literal>False</literal>). It only has an effect if the expand
 argument is also <literal>True</literal>.</para>
 
       <para>Python allows a method or function to be defined with default