[gnome-devel-docs] add some corrections by julie pichon
- From: Daniel G. Siegel <dgsiegel src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-devel-docs] add some corrections by julie pichon
- Date: Sat, 4 Dec 2010 15:26:10 +0000 (UTC)
commit c31ab882df7139fe901cdc3cdb1b6c949d3c66ef
Author: daniel g. siegel <dgsiegel gnome org>
Date: Sat Dec 4 16:25:22 2010 +0100
add some corrections by julie pichon
demos/webcam/webcam.vala.page | 14 ++++++++------
1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/demos/webcam/webcam.vala.page b/demos/webcam/webcam.vala.page
index e451172..bd12d42 100644
--- a/demos/webcam/webcam.vala.page
+++ b/demos/webcam/webcam.vala.page
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
<section>
<title>The story...</title>
<p>Who doesn't know it: your mirror just fell off the wall and broke in
- thousand pieces and you need a mirror to shave your beard of or add some make
+ thousand pieces and you need a mirror to shave your beard off or add some make
up. You only have 15 minutes left, before catching the bus to work. But
breaking a thing, mend your luck. And you are very lucky, because I am going
to show you how to write a webcam application in 15 minutes.</p>
@@ -165,7 +165,8 @@ public class Webcam : Gtk.Window
libraries. We declare a <code>Gtk.DrawingArea</code>, which will be the
element which holds our video feed afterwards. As we want to add buttons too
later, it is a good idea to add a vertical box, where we can put widgets
- into. This is done by <code>vbox.pack_start</code>. Of course, we need to add
+ into. We need a box to put multiple elements into it and we want to put stuff
+ below each other. This is done by <code>vbox.pack_start</code>. Of course, we need to add
the box to the window, which is done by writing <code>this.add (vbox)</code>.
</p>
@@ -295,7 +296,7 @@ public class Webcam : Gtk.Window
get the source of the signal, which actually is our pipeline and set the X
window id we got before <code>xoverlay.set_xwindow_id (this.xid);</code>. The
return values just pass on the message or drop the message from the message
- flow. We want to drop that single message of course, otherways somebody else
+ flow. We want to drop that single message of course, otherwise somebody else
could steal it.
</p>
@@ -399,10 +400,11 @@ public class Webcam : Gtk.Window
<p>
That's it, you have managed to create a full featured webcam photo
application in 15 minutes. Now you can shave your beard off or add some make
- up to your beautiful face, right before having a beautiful day at your work,
- where you can impress your friends and colleagues with an awesome application
- you just make in 15 minutes.
+ up to your beautiful face, right before having a beautiful day at your
+ workplace, where you can impress your friends and colleagues with an awesome
+ application you just made in 15 minutes.
</p>
+
</section>
</page>
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