[gnome-user-docs] g-h/user-add(guest): Minor edits, final



commit 1fbf6e5f57c7b4b7d43a29a74c5b0211dec7d6b3
Author: Shaun McCance <shaunm gnome org>
Date:   Sun Apr 3 23:32:38 2011 -0400

    g-h/user-add(guest): Minor edits, final

 gnome-help/C/user-add.page      |   16 ++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index 0baafaf..2c24488 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -5,8 +5,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-addguest"/>
-    <desc>Add new user so that other people can log in to the computer.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="candidate"/>
+    <desc>Add new users so that other people can log in to the computer.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 
   <title>Add a new user account</title>
 
-  <p>You can add mutliple user account to your computer. Give one account
+  <p>You can add mutliple user accounts to your computer. Give one account
   to each person in your household or company. Every user has their own
   home folder, documents, and settings.</p>
 
@@ -35,12 +35,12 @@
   to add a new user account.</p></item>
   <item><p>If you want the new user to have administrative access to the computer,
   select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type. Administrators can do things
-  like add and delete users, install software and drivers, and chang the date and
+  like add and delete users, install software and drivers, and change the date and
   time.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Enter the new user's full name. The username wil be fill in automatically
+  <item><p>Enter the new user's full name. The username will be filled in automatically
   based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you can change it if you
   like. Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
-  <item><p>The account is initially disabled, until you choose what to do about
+  <item><p>The account is initially disabled until you choose what to do about
   the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click the button label next
   to <gui>Password</gui>. Use the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list to set the
   password now, allow the user to log in without a password, or have the user
@@ -48,12 +48,12 @@
   <p>If you choose <gui>Set a password now</gui>, have the user type their password
   in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields. See
   <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>. You can also click the button next to the
-  <gui>New password</gui> to select a randomly generated secure password. These
+  <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
   passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
   be careful.</p></item>
 </steps>
 	
-<p>If you like, you can click the image next to the guest user's name on
+<p>If you like, you can click the image next to the user's name on
 the right to set an image for the account. This image will be shown in
 the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use, or you
 can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
index b9b6dc8..6cd8997 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
     <desc>Allow guests to use your computer temporarily, without having to give them a password.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
     <credit type="maintainer">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 
 <title>Add a guest user account</title>
 
-<p>You can create a user account for guests, people who will only use the computer on a brief, temporary basis. The guest user will be able to use the programs on your computer, but they won't be able to access your files, mess with your settings or install apps.</p>
+<p>You can create a user account for guests, people who will only use the computer on a brief, temporary basis. The guest user will be able to use the programs on your computer, but they won't be able to access your files, mess with your settings, or install software.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <title>Create a guest user account:</title>



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