[gnome-user-docs] updates to net-wireless-troubleshooting

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 73f93bcac92ded1497e68284271da0d3ece74227
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Mon Apr 4 18:44:10 2011 -0500

    updates to net-wireless-troubleshooting

 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page |   24 +++++--------------
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
index 7a93c7f..5775d5c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
@@ -23,32 +23,22 @@
 
 <section id="net-hardware-check">  
   <title>Gather information about your computer and network hardware:</title>
-  <p>For this section, it will be useful to have the follwing items available:</p>
+  <p>To best troubleshoot your wireless connection you will need some items and some information. Although you might not have all of these items, collect what you can:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>Your laptop and wireless router</p></item>
+      <item><p>Your laptop and wireless router (of course!)</p></item>
       <item><p>The packaging and contents for your device (particularly the user guide for your router)</p></item>
       <item><p>A driver disc - even if it only contains Windows drivers</p></item>
-      <item><p>An alternate working internet connection for downloading software and drivers</p></item>
+      <item><p>If possible, have access to an alternate working internet connection for downloading software and drivers</p></item>
     </list>
 
-  <p>Additionally, it is helpful to have the following information:</p>
+  <p>It is also helpful to have the following information available. Again, just collect what you can:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>The name of the device manufacturer</p></item>
+      <item><p>The name of the manufacturer for your computer, wireless adapter and router</p></item>
       <item><p>The complete model number of your computer and router</p></item>
-      <item><p>Any version numbers that may be printed on the device or its packaging. These can be crucial, so look carefully.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Any version numbers that may be printed on your devices or their packaging. These can be especially helpful, so look carefully.</p></item>
       <item><p>Anything on the driver disc that identifies either the device itself or the components it uses. Wireless implementation chips are often operated by firmware, a type of software written specifically for that chip.</p></item>
     </list>
-
-<p>With this information available, we will proceed with the following steps</p>
-  <list>
-    <item><p>Checking your modem and router</p></item>
-    <item><p>Check if your wireless card is enabled and recognized by your computer.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
-    <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
-  </list>
-
-  <p>make sure can identify your networking device</p>
-  <p>PCI device, USB device, internal device</p>
+ <p>Once you have these items and this information, click <gui>Next</gui> in the upper-right portion of this page to continue.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
index 9dc7b66..2c8f615 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info"/>
     
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-20" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-03-20" status="review"/>
 
 
     <credit type="author">