[gnome-user-docs] Review net-manual and video-dvd

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit 06b8ccd6f1c98538ebabfd8b9b267a1673380160
Author: Aline Bessa <alibezz gmail com>
Date:   Thu Apr 7 20:29:49 2011 +0100

    Review net-manual and video-dvd

 gnome-help/C/net-manual.page |   10 +++++-----
 gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page  |    5 +++--
 2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
index 6d0900e..95ca90e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-manual.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="net-manual">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-07" status="final"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
@@ -34,16 +34,16 @@
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Go to the <gui>IPv4 Settings</gui> tab and change the <gui>Method</gui> option to <gui>Manual</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the columns in the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> when you've finished typing each address.</p>
-  <p>All three of these addresses must be "IP addresses", which will be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Add</gui> and type the <em>IP address</em>, <em>network mask</em> and <em>default gateway IP address</em> into the corresponding columns of the <gui>Addresses</gui> list. Press <key>Enter</key> or <key>Tab</key> after typing each address.</p>
+  <p>These three addresses must be IP addresses; that is, they must be four numbers separated by periods (e.g. 123.45.6.78).</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use, separated by commas.</p>
+  <p>Type the IP addresses of the DNS servers you want to use in the corresponding field, separated by commas.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page b/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
index ae3ad64..8c33d15 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
@@ -19,11 +19,12 @@
 
 <title>Why won't DVDs play?</title>
 
-<p>If you insert a DVD into your computer and it won't play, you may not have the right DVD "codecs" installed, or the DVD might be from a different "region".</p>
+<p>If you insert a DVD into your computer and it doesn't play, you may not have the right DVD "codecs" installed, or the DVD might be from a different "region".</p>
 
 <section id="codecs">
  <title>Installing the right codecs for DVD playback</title>
- <p>In order to play DVDs, you need to have the right <em>codecs</em> installed. A codec is some software that allows applications to read a video or audio format. If you try to play a DVD and don't have the right codecs installed, the Movie Player should tell you about this and offer to install it for you. If it does not, you will have to install it manually - ask for help on how to do this using your Linux distribution's support forums or otherwise. The software packages you probably need are <app>gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly</app> and <app>libdvd0</app>.</p>
+ <p>In order to play DVDs, you need to have the right <em>codecs</em> installed. A codec is some software that allows applications to read a video or audio format. If you try to play a DVD and don't have the right codecs installed, the movie player you're using should tell you about this and offer to install them for you.
+ If this doesn't happen, you'll have to install the codecs manually - ask for help on how to do this using your Linux distribution's support forums or otherwise. The software packages you'll probably need are <app>gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly</app> and <app>libdvd0</app>.</p>
  <p>DVDs are also "copy-protected" using a system called CSS. This prevents you from copying DVDs, but it also prevents you from playing them unless you have some extra software to handle the copy protection.</p>
 
  <p>You can buy a commercial DVD decoder that can handle copy protection from <link href="http://www.fluendo.com/shop/product/fluendo-dvd-player/";>Fluendo</link>. It works with Linux and should be legal to use in all countries.</p>