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[gnome-games] [gnome-sudoku/help/C] fixed validation issues.

commit 412919ec29cb8ca677f9456bea999f1032bbee69
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski gmail com>
Date:   Tue Dec 20 00:13:38 2011 -0500

    [gnome-sudoku/help/C] fixed validation issues.

 gnome-sudoku/help/C/basics.page                |   32 ++--------
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/bug-filing.page            |    6 +-
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/commandline.page           |    5 +-
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/develop.page               |    1 -
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/documentation.page         |   11 +---
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/highlighting.page          |    7 +--
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/hints.page                 |   78 +++++++++++++-----------
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/index.page                 |   14 +---
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/intro.page                 |    1 -
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page    |   11 ++--
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/notes.page                 |   32 +++++-----
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-blank-puzzles.page   |   11 +---
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-inprogress-game.page |    1 -
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/rules.page                 |    1 -
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/save-resume.page           |    1 -
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/statistics.page            |   35 ++++------
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/strategy.page              |    4 +-
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/toolbar.page               |    6 --
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/trackers.page              |    3 +-
 gnome-sudoku/help/C/translate.page             |    7 +--
 20 files changed, 103 insertions(+), 164 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/basics.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/basics.page
index a2244db..8930dfc 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/basics.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/basics.page
@@ -1,11 +1,9 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="basics">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Chris Beiser</name>
       <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
@@ -14,34 +12,18 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
-<comment>There's some things in the manual that are better written than some of this, but we still need to get permission from the copyright holder.</comment>
+
 <title>Basics</title>
-<p>Sudoku can be played using the keyboard, the mouse, or any combination of the two.</p>
+<p>Sudoku can be played using the keyboard, the mouse,
+ or any combination of the two.</p>
 
 <section id="keyboard">
 <title>Using the keyboard</title>
 <list>
-	<item><p>To select a cell, use the arrow keys to move the blue outline onto it.</p></item>
-	<item><p>To put a number in a cell, select the cell, and then press the number.</p></item>
-	<item><p>To remove a number from a cell, select the cell, and then press the <key>Delete</key> key, the <key>Backspace</key>, or the <key>0</key> key.</p></item>
-	<!--item><p>To add notes to a cell:</p>
-		<list type="numbered">
-			<item><p>Select it.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Press <key>n</key> to add notes to the top of a cell, or <key>m</key> for the bottom.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Type your notes.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
-		</list>
-	</item>
-	<item><p>To remove notes from a cell:</p>
-		<list type="numbered">
-			<item><p>Select it.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Press <key>n</key> to remove notes from the top of a cell, or <key>m</key> to remove notes from the bottom.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Press <key>Backspace</key>.</p></item>
-			<item><p>Press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
-		</list>
-	</item-->
+  <item><p>To select a cell, use the arrow keys to move the blue outline onto it.</p></item>
+  <item><p>To put a number in a cell, select the cell, and then press the number.</p></item>
+  <item><p>To remove a number from a cell, select the cell, and then press the <key>Delete</key> key, the <key>Backspace</key>, or the <key>0</key> key.</p></item>
 </list>
 </section>
 
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/bug-filing.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/bug-filing.page
index 1353ed7..864633e 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/bug-filing.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/bug-filing.page
@@ -6,12 +6,10 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="commandline"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-12" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-    <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/commandline.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/commandline.page
index 4131af3..899f745 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/commandline.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/commandline.page
@@ -1,11 +1,9 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="commandline">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
+   <link type="guide" xref="index#advanced"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -14,7 +12,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Commandline</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/develop.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/develop.page
index 9da3ab6..cd162ee 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/develop.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/develop.page
@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Help develop</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/documentation.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/documentation.page
index 99e3cb6..d61d413 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/documentation.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/documentation.page
@@ -1,22 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="documentation">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-12-16" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-     <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+   <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Help write documentation</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/highlighting.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/highlighting.page
index fcbb65b..2e412a8 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/highlighting.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/highlighting.page
@@ -6,17 +6,14 @@
    <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-      <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Highlighting</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/hints.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/hints.page
index d1ef756..476a718 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/hints.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/hints.page
@@ -1,55 +1,61 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="hints">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-13" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-     <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Hints</title>
-<media type="image" src="figures/possible-numbers.png" width="500" style="floatleft"/>
-  <p>
+<p>
   To show possible values for all cells click:
-  </p>
- <p>
- <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Show Possible Numbers</gui></guiseq>. 
-   </p>
-  <p>
-You can edit the possible numbers by clicking in the bottom of the cell.
-  </p>
+</p>
+<p>
+  <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Show Possible Numbers</gui></guiseq>. 
+</p>
+
 <p>
-This feature works based on the logical possibilities given the current board. It does not work by looking at the solution. This means that if you made an error in an earlier move, this feature may show incorrect possible values. 
-   </p> 
-
-<section>
-   <p>
-   To ask Sudoku to show a cell that is easy to fill:
-  </p>
- <list>
-  <item><p>
+  To ask Sudoku to show a cell that is easy to fill:
+</p>
+
+<list>
+<item><p>
    Click <guiseq><gui>Tools</gui><gui>Hint</gui></guiseq>, or <gui>Hint</gui> in the <link xref="toolbar">toolbar</link>.
- </p></item>
- </list>
- 
- <p> A cell which usually has only one possible solution based on the current state of the board is outlined with flashing red.  In the case of a puzzle that has no cells that have only one possible solution, a cell with two possible solutions or the least amount of possible solutions will be highlighted. Clicking <gui>Hint</gui> multiple times may not always point you to the same cell.
-   </p>
- <note style="tip">
-  <p>
-These features can make easy puzzles too easy, so you should use this mode sparingly.
-  </p>
+</p></item>
+</list>
+
+<note><p>
+  These features work based on the logical possibilities given the current board and not work by looking at the solution. This means that if you made an error in an earlier move, these features may show incorrect possible values. 
+</p></note> 
+
+
+<note>
+<p> 
+  A cell which usually has only one possible solution based on the current state of the board is outlined with flashing red.  In the case of a puzzle that has no cells that have only one possible solution, a cell with two possible solutions or the least amount of possible solutions will be highlighted. Clicking <gui>Hint</gui> multiple times may not always point you to the same cell.
+</p>
 </note>
-</section>
+
+<p>
+  You can edit the possible numbers by clicking in the bottom of the cell.
+</p>
+
+<note style="tip">
+<p>
+ These features can make easy puzzles too easy, so you should use this mode sparingly.
+</p>
+</note>
+
+
+<p>
+ <media type="image" src="figures/possible-numbers.png" width="500" /> 
+</p>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/index.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/index.page
index 1eaf798..c5105b9 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/index.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/index.page
@@ -1,27 +1,21 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="guide" style="task"
 	id="index">
-
   <info>
-    <title type='link' role="trail"><media type="image" src="figures/logo.png"/></title>
+    <title type='link' role="trail"><media type="image" src="figures/logo.png" /></title>
     <title type='link'>GNOME Sudoku</title>
     <title type='text'>GNOME Sudoku</title>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-    <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
-
 <title><media type="image" src="figures/logo32.png">GNOME Sudoku logo</media>GNOME Sudoku</title>
-
    <section id="play" style="2column">
     <title>Game Play</title>
    </section>
@@ -41,6 +35,4 @@
    <section id="get-involved" style="2column">
     <title>Get Involved</title>
    </section>
-
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/intro.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/intro.page
index ddaf7da..3f5b11f 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/intro.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/intro.page
@@ -13,7 +13,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 <title>Introduction</title>
 <p>Gnome Sudoku is an application to generate and play games of Sudoku, a popular number-based logic puzzle in which one must fill a 9 X 9 square with the correct digits.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
index 2fff907..705c4a0 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/keyboard-shortcuts.page
@@ -10,22 +10,21 @@
       <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+     <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+     <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Keyboard shortcuts</title>
 <p> This is a list of the keyboard shortcuts you can use in Sudoku. </p>
 
-<!--page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-type="topic" style="task"
-id="keyboard-shortcuts"-->
-
 <section id="starting-restarting">
 	<title>Starting and exiting</title>	
-<comment>Is there a word that encapsulates both starting AND restarting? Didn't include restarting here for the sake of brevity - Chris</comment>
+<comment><p>Is there a word that encapsulates both starting AND restarting? Didn't include restarting here for the sake of brevity - Chris</p></comment>
 	<table frame="all" rules="cols" shade="rows">
 		<tr>
 			<td><p>New game</p></td>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/notes.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/notes.page
index ba0d620..df16e0f 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/notes.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/notes.page
@@ -1,36 +1,36 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="notes">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
+   <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
-      <name>Chris Beiser</name>
-      <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
+      <name>Thomas Hinkle</name>
+      <email>tmhinkle gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
-	<credit type="author copyright">
-	  <name>Thomas Hinkle</name>
-	  <email>tmhinkle gmail com</email>
-          <years>2011</years>
-	</credit>
+   <credit type="editor">
+     <name>Chris Beiser</name>
+     <email>ctbeiser gmail com</email>
+   </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Notes</title>
-<p>Notes, or pencilmarks, can be added to any cell. They allow you to mark possible values for a cell, or store other data that might help you. Notes will store all characters in order, but will remove repetitions of characters.</p> <comment>Other wordings I considered were 'repeated instances of characters', but I wanted to communicate it would leave the first one. If you can come up with something better, by all means, change it.</comment>
+<p>Notes, or pencilmarks, can be added to any cell. They allow you to mark possible values for a cell, or store other data that might help you. Notes will store all characters in order, but will remove repetitions of characters.</p> 
+
 <p>To add notes to a cell:</p>
+
 <steps>
-	<item><p>Select the cell</p></item>
-	<item><p>Click on the part of a cell that is above the line that appears when you hover over it. Alternatively, type <key>N</key>.</p></item>
-	<item><p>Type your notes</p></item>
-	<item><p>Press <key>Enter</key> or click outside of the text box.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Select the cell</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click on the part of a cell that is above the line that appears when you hover over it. Alternatively, type <key>N</key>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Type your notes</p></item>
+  <item><p>Press <key>Enter</key> or click outside of the text box.</p></item>
 </steps>
+
 <note><p>You can also take notes in the bottom of the cell by clicking in the bottom of the cell or by typing <key>M</key>. However, this area is used when you click <link xref="hints">Show All Possible Numbers</link>. If you plan to use this area, you should not use Show All Possible Numbers.</p></note>
+
 <note><p>You can add a number to the notes at the top of the square by typing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>1</key></keyseq> through <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>9</key></keyseq></p></note>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-blank-puzzles.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-blank-puzzles.page
index 1fe1051..c30f3db 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-blank-puzzles.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-blank-puzzles.page
@@ -1,22 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="print-blank-puzzles">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#print"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-14" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-       <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#print"/>
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
+      <years>2011</years>
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Print blank sudokus</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-inprogress-game.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-inprogress-game.page
index 3cb02aa..55196dd 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-inprogress-game.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/print-inprogress-game.page
@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Print your game</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/rules.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/rules.page
index 83a91e8..52d2473 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/rules.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/rules.page
@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Game rules</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/save-resume.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/save-resume.page
index 1a7eba2..2a7239e 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/save-resume.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/save-resume.page
@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Save and resume</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/statistics.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/statistics.page
index d5e3d69..33afe92 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/statistics.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/statistics.page
@@ -1,52 +1,45 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="statistics">
-
   <info>
-   <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-06" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-     <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Statistics</title>
-<p>To view the statistics about the current puzzle, click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Puzzle Statistics</gui></guiseq>.
-</p>
+<p>To view the statistics about the current puzzle, click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Puzzle Statistics</gui></guiseq>.</p>
   <figure>
-            <desc>Very hard puzzle statistics box example</desc>
-            <media type="image" mime="image/png"
-            src="figures/stats-very-hard.png" width="400" >
-            </media>
-      </figure>
+    <desc>Very hard puzzle statistics box example</desc>
+    <media type="image" mime="image/png"
+    src="figures/stats-very-hard.png" width="400" >
+    </media>
+  </figure>
 
-<section>
 <p>
 <app>GNOME Sudoku</app> ranks puzzles based on the number of cells that can be rapidly filled. 
 </p>
+
 <p>
 The puzzle statistics box shows:
 </p>
+
 <list>
  <item><p>the overall difficulty</p></item>
  <item><p>the number of cells which can be filled by elimination, starting from the blank grid (i.e. only a 2 can go in this box, so it must be a 2)</p></item>
   <item><p>the number of cells that can be filled by the process of filling, starting from the blank grid (i.e. only one cell in this row can be a 2, so it must be a 2)</p></item>
   <item><p>the number of times in solving the puzzle that the program used the trial-and-error algorithm to solve the puzzle</p></item>
 </list>
-<note>
-<p>
+
+<note><p>
 All sudoku puzzles can be solved without ever having to guess. 
 When the statistics box says that Sudoku used trial-and-error X number of times, it does not mean that a human would have to use trial-and-error to solve the puzzle.
-</p>
-</note>
-</section>
+</p></note>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/strategy.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/strategy.page
index 0f5c8cb..c77551b 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/strategy.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/strategy.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="strategy">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-15" status="stub"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2011-12-15" status="review"/>
    <link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name></name>
@@ -13,5 +13,5 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Strategy</title>
-
+  <p></p>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/toolbar.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/toolbar.page
index 0a1c86b..8096e03 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/toolbar.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/toolbar.page
@@ -1,10 +1,8 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
 	type="topic" style="task"
 	id="toolbar">
-
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
-    
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-13" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Chris Beiser</name>
@@ -14,7 +12,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Toolbar</title>
@@ -23,7 +20,4 @@
 
 <p>The toolbar, located under the menu bar, lets you perform common actions with your mouse. To use a toolbar item, just click on it. The buttons, from left to right, are New Game, Undo, Redo, <link xref="hints">Hint</link>, and <link xref="trackers">Track Additions</link>.</p> 
 
-<comment>The just might violate the neutral-voice, but it seems to emphasize that there's no other steps. - Chris Beiser.</comment>
-
-
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/trackers.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/trackers.page
index aee6f9e..778dcb5 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/trackers.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/trackers.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
    <link type="guide" xref="index#tips"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-11-13" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="author copyright">
+    <credit type="editor copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
       <years>2011</years>
@@ -13,7 +13,6 @@
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Track trial-and-error solutions</title>
diff --git a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/translate.page b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/translate.page
index c18eb0c..73dbf7a 100644
--- a/gnome-sudoku/help/C/translate.page
+++ b/gnome-sudoku/help/C/translate.page
@@ -6,17 +6,14 @@
    <link type="guide" xref="index#get-involved"/>
     
     <revision pkgversion="3.4" version="0.1" date="2011-12-16" status="review"/>
-    <credit type="copyright">
-     <years>2011</years>
-    </credit>
-    <credit type="author">
+    <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+      <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"; />
   </info>
 
 <title>Help translate</title>
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