[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] content and style edits to files-disc-write.page. marked page as final.

[Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>]

commit 8a286bb2c856bf7316f2bd8efaae2259b31f66fc
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 10:56:56 2011 -0400

    content and style edits to files-disc-write.page. marked page as final.

 gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page |   19 +++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page b/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
index 7c43425..c0b8b13 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-disc-write.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files" group="more"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -17,20 +17,19 @@
 
   <title>Write files to a CD or DVD</title>
 
-  <p>The <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui> in the file manager makes it easy to transfer files to other computers or perform <link xref="backup-why">backups</link> by putting files onto a blank disc. To write files to a CD or DVD:</p>
+  <p>You can put files onto a blank disc by using <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui>. The option to create a CD or DVD will appear in the file manager as soon as you place the CD into your CD/DVD writable drive. To write files to a CD or DVD:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item><p>Place an empty disc into your CD/DVD writable drive.</p></item>
     <item>
-     <p>In the <gui>Blank CD/DVD-R Disc</gui> window that appears, select <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui> and click <gui>OK</gui>. The <gui>CD/DVD Creator Folder</gui> window will open.</p>
+     <p>In the <gui>Blank CD/DVD-R Disc</gui> window that appears, select <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui> and click <gui>OK</gui>. The <gui>CD/DVD Creator</gui> folder window will open.</p>
      <p>(You can also click on <gui>Blank CD/DVD-R Disc</gui> under <gui>Devices</gui> in the file manager sidebar.)</p>
     </item>
     <item><p>In the <gui>Disc Name</gui> field, type a name for the disc.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Drag or <link xref="files-copy">copy</link> the desired files into the window.</p></item>
-    <item>
-     <p>Under <gui>Select a disc to write to</gui>, choose the blank disc.</p>
-     <p>(You could choose <gui>Image file</gui> instead. This will put the files in a <em>disc image</em>, which will be saved on your computer. You can then burn that disc image onto a blank disc at a later date.)</p>
-    </item>
+    <item><p>Drag or copy the desired files into the window.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Write to Disc</gui></p></item>
+    <item><p>Under <gui>Select a disc to write to</gui>, choose the blank disc.</p>
+     <p>(You could choose <gui>Image file</gui> instead. This will put the files in a <em>disc image</em>, which will be saved on your computer. You can then burn that disc image onto a blank disc at a later date.)</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Properties</gui> if you want to adjust burning speed, the location of temporary files, and other options. The default options should be fine.</p></item>
     <item>
      <p>Click the <gui>Burn</gui> button to begin recording.</p>
@@ -40,8 +39,8 @@
   </steps>
 
 <section id="problem">
- <title>The disc wasn't burned properly!</title>
- <p>Sometimes, discs aren't burned correctly and you won't be able to see the files you put onto the disc when you insert it into a computer.</p>
+ <title>If the disc wasn't burned properly</title>
+ <p>Sometimes the computer doesn't record the data correctly, and you won't be able to see the files you put onto the disc when you insert it into a computer.</p>
 
  <p>In this case, try burning the disc again but use a lower burning speed, e.g. 12x rather than 48x. Burning at slower speeds is more reliable. You can choose the speed by clicking the <gui>Properties</gui> button in the <gui>CD/DVD Creator Folder</gui> window.</p>
 </section>