[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] I checked and added some details about date/ time settings

[Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>]

commit 048e7ce0efd060581bdccef79c00402248198315
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date:   Tue Jun 7 23:32:39 2011 -0500

    I checked and added some details about date/ time settings

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page      |   25 ++++++++++++-------------
 gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page |    2 +-
 2 files changed, 13 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index 0723d89..d8a7602 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
-    <desc>Update the time/date displayed at the top of the screen.</desc>
+    <desc>Go into the date/time of the middle on the top bar.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="reviewed"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -14,19 +14,18 @@
     
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
+<title>Change the date and time</title>
+<p>To adjust the date or time, go to the middle of the top bar and set them manually.</p>
 
-<title>Change the time and date</title>
-<p>To adjust the time and date, click on the clock located in the center of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p>
-<p>Now, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password to be able to:</p> 
-<list>
+<steps>
+<item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+
+<item><p>Click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password.</p></item>
 <item><p>Set the time manually by clicking on the arrows for the hour and minute hands.</p></item>
-<item><p>Set the date manually by clicking on the drop-down menu.</p></item>
-<item>
- <p>Have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
- <p>When <em>network time</em> is turned on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p>
-</item>
-</list>
+<item><p>Set the date manually by clicking on the drop-down list.</p></item>
+<item><p>Have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
+ <p>When <em>network time</em> is turned on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p></item>
 
 <p>You can also change the hour format display by turning the 24-hour format ON or OFF.</p>
-
+</steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
index a7cd5a3..3bbf901 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-timezone.page
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 <steps>
   <item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar.</p></item>
   <item><p>Select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Now, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password  </item></p> 
+  <item><p>Now, click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password.  </p></item>
   <item><p>Click on your current continent, then select your current city from the drop-down list.</p></item>
 </steps>