[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] Finalise clock-set

[Phil Bull <philbull src gnome org>]

commit 310d4d96c076d7c78a599eb7022705e212d16e0a
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 8 05:25:57 2011 +0100

    Finalise clock-set

 gnome-help/C/clock-set.page |   27 +++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
index d8a7602..d32c5e9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/clock-set.page
@@ -4,9 +4,9 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="clock"/>
-    <desc>Go into the date/time of the middle on the top bar.</desc>
+    <desc>Click the clock on the top bar and go into the <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui> to alter the date/time.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-03" status="final"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-07" status="reviewed"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="final"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -15,17 +15,20 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 <title>Change the date and time</title>
-<p>To adjust the date or time, go to the middle of the top bar and set them manually.</p>
 
-<steps>
-<item><p>Click on the clock located in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-
-<item><p>Click on <gui>Unlock</gui> and type your password.</p></item>
-<item><p>Set the time manually by clicking on the arrows for the hour and minute hands.</p></item>
-<item><p>Set the date manually by clicking on the drop-down list.</p></item>
-<item><p>Have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
- <p>When <em>network time</em> is turned on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p></item>
+<p>If the date and time displayed on the top bar are incorrect or in the wrong format, you can change them:</p>
 
-<p>You can also change the hour format display by turning the 24-hour format ON or OFF.</p>
+<steps>
+ <item><p>Click on the clock in the middle of the top bar and select <gui>Date and Time Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> and type the <link xref="user-admin-explain">admin password</link>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to choose the year, day, hour and minute. You can choose the month from a drop-down list.</p></item>
+ <item>
+  <p>If you like, you can have the clock update itself automatically by turning the <gui>Network Time</gui> ON.</p>
+  <p>When <em>network time</em> is turned on, the computer will periodically synchronize its clock with a very accurate clock on the internet, so you don't have to do it manually. This will only work if you are connected to the internet.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+  <p>You can also change how the hour is displayed by turning the 24-hour format ON or OFF.</p>
+ </item>
 </steps>
+
 </page>