[gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] I checked the steps of this file and reorganized the text on it.
- From: Julita Inca <jinca src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs/gnome-3-0] I checked the steps of this file and reorganized the text on it.
- Date: Wed, 8 Jun 2011 22:04:42 +0000 (UTC)
commit f92d14c75c782d8c9d667df247a7e90dd5a15f27
Author: Julita Inca <yrazes gmail com>
Date: Wed Jun 8 18:14:34 2011 -0400
I checked the steps of this file and reorganized the text on it.
gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page | 17 ++++++++---------
1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
index 0a81cd8..fbd101e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/disk-benchmark.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<link type="guide" xref="disk"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.0" date="2011-04-04" status="final"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-04-06" status="outdated"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="3.0.1" date="2011-06-08" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Team</name>
@@ -22,17 +22,16 @@
<title>Test the performance of your hard disk</title>
-<p>To test the performance of the hard disk, go to the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and open the <gui>Disk Utility</gui>.</p>
+<p>If you want to perform benchmark test and see how fast is your hard disk:</p>
-<p>To run a benchmark in <gui>Disk Utility</gui>:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click on the hard disk in the <gui>Storage Devices</gui> list. Information will appear about the disk and its status under <gui>Drive</gui>.</p></item>
+
+ <item><p>Open the <app>Disk Utility</app> application from the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
+ <item><p>You can choose the hard disk from the <gui>Storage Devices</gui> list. Information about the disk and its status will appear under <gui>Drive</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>Choose <gui>Benchmark</gui>.</p></item>
- <item>
- <p>Click <gui>Start Read-Only Benchmark</gui> or <gui>Start Read/Write Benchmark</gui>.</p>
- <p>The read-only benchmark will only test how fast data can be read off the disk. The read/write benchmark will also test how fast data can be put onto the disk, so it will take longer to complete.</p>
- </item>
-</steps>
+ <item><p>Click <gui>Start Read-Only Benchmark</gui> to test how fast data can be read off the disk or <gui>Start Read/Write Benchmark</gui> to test how fast data can be read off the disk and how fast data can be put onto the disk. The last option will take longer to complete.</p></item>
+
+</steps>
<p>When the test is finished, the results will appear on the graph.</p>
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