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[vinagre] Update for recent UI changes

commit 8f246981be00d41adcc33941305a6718e2814408
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 googlemail com>
Date:   Wed Jun 15 21:59:40 2011 +0200

    Update for recent UI changes
    
    Removed bookmarks help because the side pane has been removed. Merged
    connect-close into connect. Deleted leftovers from Docbook. Changed some
    sections to be less technical, more active and more topic-oriented.

 help/C/bookmarks.page            |   80 -------------------------------------
 help/C/connect-close.page        |   24 -----------
 help/C/connect.page              |   25 ++++++------
 help/C/fullscreen.page           |   12 +++++-
 help/C/getting-started.page.stub |   82 --------------------------------------
 help/C/introduction.page         |    5 ++-
 help/C/preferences.page          |    4 +-
 help/C/reverse-connections.page  |   14 +++---
 help/C/scaling.page              |    4 +-
 help/C/take-screenshot.page      |    3 +
 help/Makefile.am                 |    2 -
 11 files changed, 42 insertions(+), 213 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/connect.page b/help/C/connect.page
index 3a21e6e..17953a5 100755
--- a/help/C/connect.page
+++ b/help/C/connect.page
@@ -16,9 +16,10 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Establishing a connection</title>
+  <title>Establish a connection</title>
 
-  <p>This method can be used to connect to other computers on your network.</p>
+  <p>You can connect to other computers on your local network using
+  <app>Vinagre</app>.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -32,23 +33,20 @@
       <p>Choose the <gui>Protocol</gui> and the <gui>Host</gui> for the
       connection.</p>
       <note>
-        <p>You can see all available hosts on your local network by clicking
-        the <gui>Find</gui> button. The availabity of the <gui>Find</gui> button
-        depends on the protocol you have selected. <app>Vinagre</app> relies on
-        <app>Avahi</app> to browse for machines on your local network. Also,
-        note that <app>Vinagre</app> can be compiled without <app>Avahi</app>
-        support. In this case, this button will not be displayed.</p>
+        <p>Some protocols allow you to see see all available computers on your
+        local network by clicking the <gui>Find</gui> button. Without
+        <app>Avahi</app> support, this button will not be displayed.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the options which you want enabled when the connection is
-      established. Options will vary depending on the protocol which is used.</p>
+      made. Options will vary depending on the protocol you use.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <gui>Connect</gui> button. At this point, the host will be
+      <p>Click the <gui>Connect</gui> button. At this point, the host to will
       need to confirm that they want the connection established.</p>
       <note>
-        <p>Some machines may require a secure connection: an authentication
+        <p>Some computers may require a secure connection: an authentication
         dialog will be displayed, asking for the credentials. The type of
         credentials depend on the remote host, it may be a password and a
         username. If you select <gui>Remember this credential</gui>,
@@ -63,6 +61,9 @@
   </steps>
 
   <p>If the connection has been used previously, you can also access it
-  through <guiseq><gui>Remote</gui><gui>Recent Connections</gui></guiseq></p>
+  through <guiseq><gui>Remote</gui><gui>Recent Connections</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+
+  <p>To close a connection, choose <guiseq><gui>Remote</gui>
+  <gui>Close</gui></guiseq> or click the <gui>Close</gui> button.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/fullscreen.page b/help/C/fullscreen.page
index 465f6f9..50bdaee 100644
--- a/help/C/fullscreen.page
+++ b/help/C/fullscreen.page
@@ -16,8 +16,16 @@
 
   <title>Fullscreen mode</title>
 
-  <p>Choose <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Fullscreen</gui></guiseq>, or press the
-  corresponding toolbar button, to view the display area in fullscreen mode.</p>
+  <p>Fullscreen mode can be useful if viewing a desktop which is the same size
+  or larger than yours.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Choose <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Fullscreen</gui></guiseq>, or press
+      the corresponding toolbar button, to view the display area in fullscreen
+      mode.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
   <note>
     <p>While in fullscreen mode, move the mouse to the top-center of the screen
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 5b60f41..7cedcb5 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -17,9 +17,12 @@
   <title>Introduction</title>
 
   <p><app>Vinagre</app> is a remote desktop viewer application for the GNOME
-  desktop which uses Virtual Network Computing (VNC), and possibly other
+  desktop which uses Virtual Network Computing (VNC), and other
   protocols, to remotely control another computer.</p>
 
+  <p><app>Vinagre</app> can be used to control another computer and interact
+  with its desktop.</p>
+
   <p><app>Vinagre</app> provides the following features:</p>
   <list>
     <item><p>connect to several machines at the same time</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/preferences.page b/help/C/preferences.page
index eff01c4..937aacb 100755
--- a/help/C/preferences.page
+++ b/help/C/preferences.page
@@ -16,6 +16,7 @@
   </info>
 
   <title>Preferences</title>
+
   <p>To configure <app>Vinagre</app>, choose <guiseq><gui>Edit</gui>
   <gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>. The <gui>Preferences</gui> dialog contains
   the following items:</p>
@@ -33,7 +34,8 @@
       mnemonics, like <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>M</key></keyseq>. This means
       that <app>Vinagre</app> will catch those key combinations, instead of
       sending them to the remote machine. This option is disabled by default
-      because most of the time, you will be working on a remote machine.</p>
+      because most of the time, you will be interacting with the computer which
+      you have connected to.</p>
       <note>
         <p>When the <gui>Allow keyboard shortcuts</gui> option is disabled in
         the preferences, <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key>
diff --git a/help/C/reverse-connections.page b/help/C/reverse-connections.page
index 974c3b8..d2e4c8d 100644
--- a/help/C/reverse-connections.page
+++ b/help/C/reverse-connections.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index#connections"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="connect"/>
     <title type="sort">3</title>
-    <desc>Connecting to computers not on your local network: bypassing firewall
+    <desc>Connect to computers not on your local network: bypassing firewall
     restrictions on remote host.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -47,11 +47,11 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="accessing-behind-firewall">
-    <title>Accessing a remote desktop behind a firewall</title>
+    <title>Access a computer behind a firewall</title>
 
-    <p>The remote machine needs to connect to your machine using your IP address
-    and port number, which are in the <gui>Reverse Connections...</gui> dialog,
-    under <gui>Connectivity</gui>.</p>
+    <p>The remote computer needs to connect to your machine using your IP
+    address and port number, which are in the <gui>Reverse Connections...</gui>
+    dialog, under <gui>Connectivity</gui>.</p>
 
     <note>
       <p>Currently, <app>Vino</app>, the GNOME VNC server, does not support
@@ -60,8 +60,8 @@
       <app>TightVNC</app>, do have support for reverse connections.</p>
     </note>
 
-    <p>Once a remote machine connects to your machine, <app>Vinagre</app> will
-    establish the reverse connection.</p>
+    <p>Once the remote computer connects to your machine, <app>Vinagre</app>
+    will establish the reverse connection.</p>
 
     <note>
       <p>When connecting to a machine which is not on your local network, you
diff --git a/help/C/scaling.page b/help/C/scaling.page
index 88ae732..b1e09cd 100644
--- a/help/C/scaling.page
+++ b/help/C/scaling.page
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#options"/>
-    <desc>Scaling the remote desktop to fit the display area.</desc>
+    <desc>Scale the remote desktop to fit the display area.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
       <email>kittykat3756 googlemail com</email>
@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
     </license>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Scaling the remote desktop</title>
+  <title>Scale the remote desktop</title>
 
   <p>Some protocols have an option to scale the remote desktop to fit your
   display area.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/take-screenshot.page b/help/C/take-screenshot.page
index e5a4910..f0634f4 100644
--- a/help/C/take-screenshot.page
+++ b/help/C/take-screenshot.page
@@ -16,6 +16,9 @@
 
   <title>Take a screenshot</title>
 
+  <p>You can take screenshots of only the desktop you have connected to by using
+  the tool provided by <app>Vinagre</app>.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Choose <guiseq><gui>Remote</gui><gui>Take screenshot</gui></guiseq>, or
diff --git a/help/Makefile.am b/help/Makefile.am
index 2db684f..b805d5d 100644
--- a/help/Makefile.am
+++ b/help/Makefile.am
@@ -14,9 +14,7 @@ DOC_FIGURES = \
 # TODO: Install reverse-connections only with the corresponding plugin.
 
 DOC_PAGES = \
-	bookmarks.page \
 	connect.page \
-	connect-close.page \
 	connect-file.page \
 	fullscreen.page \
 	index.page \
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