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[gnome-user-docs] Update page statuses

commit b30307ad693c4f40034aafcf67cd707ed6165182
Author: Phil Bull <philbull gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 19 19:44:17 2011 -0400

    Update page statuses

 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page             |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page             |   13 +++++-----
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-install.page               |   24 --------------------
 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page                  |    1 +
 gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page                       |   19 ++++++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/shell-files.page                      |    2 +-
 ...hell-notifications.page => shell-messages.page} |   16 ++++++------
 gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page                   |    4 ++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-prefs.page.old                  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page             |    5 ++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page                |    4 ++-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page               |    7 +++--
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page           |   13 ++++++----
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page             |   15 ++++++-----
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page          |   10 ++++----
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces-add.page     |   23 +++++++-----------
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page                    |    7 +++--
 18 files changed, 78 insertions(+), 90 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index 62a0556..21fb9d4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-apps-favorites">
 
   <info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page
index 3d215c1..0c35edb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-forcequit.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-apps-forcequit">
 
   <info>
@@ -7,8 +8,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
     <link type="seealso" xref="shell-apps-open" />
     
-    <desc>How to force quit any app.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-10" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Make an application close if it stops responding.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -17,14 +18,14 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Force Unresponsive Program to Close</title>
+<title>Force an unresponsive program to close</title>
    <p> To force quit any application: </p>
    <steps>
      <item><p>
        Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq>.
      </p></item>
      <item><p>
-       A command window pops up.  Type <cmd>xkill</cmd>.  Your mouse point turns into an 'x'.
+       A command window pops up.  Type <cmd>xkill</cmd>.  Your mouse pointer turns into an 'x'.
      </p></item>
      <item><p>
        Click on the application to terminate it.
@@ -35,7 +36,5 @@
      After you press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>F2</key></keyseq>, you can press <key>Esc</key> if you change your mind about force quiting the application, or if the application starts responding.
    </p>
    </note>
-<comment>
-<p>Explain Force Quit. Does the Shell gray-out apps that have frozen too, like Compiz does?</p>
-</comment>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
index db823ec..9eb4388 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-open.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-apps-open">
 
   <info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
index a3ea89a..27729ed 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-exit.page
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="guide"
+      type="topic"
       id="shell-exit">
 
   <info>
@@ -7,8 +7,10 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="shellintro" />
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
 
-    <desc>Lock screen, switch user, log out or suspend or shutdown?</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-02-24" status="candidate"/>
+    <desc>Learn how to leave your user account, by logging out, switching user and so on.</desc>
+    <!-- Should this be a guide which links to other topics? -->
+    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -17,14 +19,15 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Logging out, shutting down...</title>
+<title>Logging out, shutting down, switching user</title>
 <note>
  <p>
   From the login screen, you can click on the bottom right hand corner to bring up the shut down option menu.  Select <gui>Suspend</gui>, <gui>Restart</gui> or <gui>Shut Down</gui>.
  </p>
 </note>
 
-<section id = "logout"><title>Logout or Switch User</title>
+<section id = "logout">
+<title>Log out or switch user</title>
 <steps>
  <item>
   <p>
@@ -65,7 +68,8 @@
 </steps>
 </section>
 
-<section id = "lock-screen"><title>Lock Screen</title>
+<section id = "lock-screen">
+<title>Lock the screen</title>
  <p>
  To lock your screen:
  </p>
@@ -95,7 +99,8 @@ If more than one user has an account on the computer and the screen is locked, o
  </note>
 </section>
 
-<section id = "shut-down"><title>Shut Down Options</title>
+<section id = "shut-down">
+<title>Shutting down, restarting, and sending the computer to sleep</title>
 
 <note>
  <p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-files.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-files.page
index 544c4e0..c28b8c5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-files.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-files.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
     
     <desc>Photos, music and documents.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
similarity index 79%
rename from gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
rename to gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
index d0a85fc..5dd0482 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-messages.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
     
     <desc></desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="stub"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="stub"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -28,14 +28,14 @@ If an application wants to get your attention, it'll show a notification at the
 </p>
 </section>
 
-<section id="replay"><title>Replay Notifications</title>
-<p>
-</p>
-
+<section id="replay">
+ <title>Replay notifications</title>
+ <p></p>
 </section>
 
-<section id="change-preferences"><title>Change Preferences</title>
-<p>
-</p>
+<section id="change-preferences">
+ <title>Change preferences</title>
+ <p></p>
 </section>
+
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
index 2171e49..e552ec1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-overview.page
@@ -3,9 +3,11 @@
       id="shell-overview">
 
   <info>
+  
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="shellintro" />
+    
     <desc>An overview of the different parts of the desktop.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-prefs.page.old b/gnome-help/C/shell-prefs.page.old
index bbd6f20..d04614f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-prefs.page.old
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-prefs.page.old
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="prefs" />
     
     <desc>Alter desktop settings.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
index 814bf27..6908e92 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-session-status.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-session-status">
 
   <info>
@@ -8,7 +9,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
     
     <desc>Change your chat status to tell people if you're busy or available.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
index d1339d9..1011ce2 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-terminology.page
@@ -5,8 +5,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index" group="shellintro" />
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview" />
+    
     <desc>An overview of terms used to describe different parts of the desktop.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="draft"/>
+    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="draft"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
index 730cd63..4783d02 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-lost.page
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-windows-lost">
 
   <info>
   
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
     
-    <desc>Check <gui>Activities</gui> overview or workspaces.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-18" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Check the activities overview or look at other workspaces.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
index 22aea89..5686800 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-maximize.page
@@ -1,13 +1,16 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-windows-maximize">
 
   <info>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
 
-    <desc>Maximize, restore, resize, arrange and hide. </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <desc>See how you can maximize, restore, resize, arrange and hide windows.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <!-- See shell-windows-states -->
+    
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -16,7 +19,7 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Maximize and unmaximize (restore) a window:</title>
+  <title>Maximize and unmaximize (restore) a window</title>
 
     <p> To maximize or unmaximize a window, you can:</p>
      <list>
@@ -35,7 +38,7 @@
 
     <note style="tip">
       <p>
-        Pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>right-click</key></keyseq> anywhere in the application screen will allow you to move the application. Some people may find this easier than needing to click in the <gui>title bar</gui> area of an application.
+        Pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>right-click</key></keyseq> anywhere in a window will allow you to move the window. Some people may find this easier than needing to click in the <gui>title bar</gui> of an application.
       </p>
       <p>
          You can also use your keyboard to maximize a window. Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Space</key></keyseq> to bring up the window menu, and then press <key>x</key>.
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
index ed07952..899aaf9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-states.page
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
 
-    <desc>Maximize, restore, resize, arrange and hide. </desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Maximize, restore, resize, arrange and hide.</desc>
+    
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -16,13 +17,13 @@
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
-<title>Window Operations and Modes</title>
+<title>Window operations and modes</title>
 <p>
    Windows work in a very similar way to windows on other operating systems.
 </p>
 
 <section id="min-rest-close">
-<title>Minimize, Restore and Close</title>
+<title>Minimize, restore and close</title>
 
 <terms>
 
@@ -98,7 +99,7 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="resize">
-<title>Resize a Window</title>
+<title>Resize a window</title>
 
 <note style="important">
  <p>
@@ -119,14 +120,14 @@ To resize in the vertical direction, move the mouse pointer to the top or bottom
 </section>
 
 <section id="arrange">
-<title>Ways to Arrange Windows In Your Workspace</title>
+<title>Ways to arrange windows in your workspace</title>
 <p>
   You can automatically arrange two windows side by side.  <key>Alt</key> + click and drag one window towards the left until the cursor touches the left side of the screen.  The left half of the screen becomes hilighted.  Unclick, and your window should automaticaly take up exaclty half your screen.  Do the same thing for another window, dragging it to the right side.
   </p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="hide">
-<title>Hide Windows From View</title>
+<title>Hide windows from view</title>
 <p>
   To hide a window from view, you can just <link xref="shell-windows-states#min-rest-close">minimize</link> it.  It will 'disappear' into the top left hand corner of the window.  To be able to access it, enter the <gui>Activities</gui> view.
 </p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
index 2c5f48b..99042dd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-switching.page
@@ -1,13 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-windows-switching">
 
   <info>
   
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-windows"/>
     
-    <desc>Different ways of doing the switch.</desc>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <desc>Learn how to quickly switch between windows, using things like the Alt-Tab switcher.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -33,12 +34,11 @@ Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> to switch between windows.
 <item><p>
 Press <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Shift</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> to cycle through the application windows in reverse.
 </p>
-<note style="tip">
 
+<note style="tip">
 <p>
  The windows are grouped by application and the previews of the applications with multiple windows are available as you click through. The previews show up after a short delay, but you can get them immediately by clicking the â?? arrow key. 
 </p>
-
 </note>
 
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces-add.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces-add.page
index 6fdff94..4973df7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces-add.page
@@ -1,18 +1,22 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-      type="topic" style="task"
+      type="topic"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-windows-workspaces-add">
 
   <info>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
+    
+    <desc>Workspaces are added automatically; there's always one more workspace available in the activities overview.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+    
   </info>
 
 <title>Add a workspace</title>
@@ -29,17 +33,12 @@
 
    </item>
 </list>
-  <note>
- <p>
- You can never remove the first workspace.
- </p>
- </note>
-
-<section id="switch">
- <title>Switch between workspaces</title>
 
+<p>There is always at least one workspace.</p>
 
 
+<section id="switch">
+ <title>Switch between workspaces</title>
 <terms>
 <item>
   <title>From the <gui>Activities</gui> overview:</title>
@@ -62,10 +61,6 @@ Press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Alt</key><key>&#8593;</key></keyseq> to move t
 </item>
 </terms>
 
-
-
-
-
 </section>
 
 <section id="move">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces.page
index 50985c7..a9fd4b7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows-workspaces.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="shell-windows#working-with-workspaces"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
index 1165a83..99f943a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-windows.page
@@ -1,5 +1,6 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="guide"
+      style="task"
       id="shell-windows">
 
   <info>
@@ -9,7 +10,7 @@
 
     <desc>Move and organize your windows.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-01-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2011-03-19" status="incomplete"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -42,11 +43,11 @@ Right clicking on the application icon for a running application will bring all
 </p>
 -->
 <section id="working-with-windows" style="2column">
- <title>Working With Windows</title>
+ <title>Working with windows</title>
 </section>
 
 <section id="working-with-workspaces" style="2column">
- <title>Working With Workspaces</title>
+ <title>Working with workspaces</title>
 </section>
 
 <comment><p>Briefly explain the different window states that exist and how you can use and recognize those states. Discuss interesting ways of arranging windows (i.e. if there is a "Tile" option or something like that). Mention, in passing, how you can move and resize windows in multiple ways.</p>
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