[gtk-web/gtk-osx] Editorial changes suggested by Martyn Russell

[John Ralls <jralls src gnome org>]

commit 56cd5eb84cd06d1ca4cce37648e563afbc546c0c
Author: John Ralls <jralls ceridwen us>
Date:   Tue Oct 4 09:42:30 2011 -0700

    Editorial changes suggested by Martyn Russell

 download/macos.php |    5 ++---
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/download/macos.php b/download/macos.php
index f9cc506..f944ffd 100755
--- a/download/macos.php
+++ b/download/macos.php
@@ -8,8 +8,7 @@ ob_start();
 
 <h3>About</h3>
 <p>Do you have a favorite GTK+ application that you'd like to
-run on your Mac, but you don't really like X-Windows, MacPorts, or
-Fink? Maybe you'd like to have a more Mac-like look and feel, with the
+run on your Mac with a more Mac-like look and feel, with the
 menus up on the menu bar and standard Mac keyboard shortcuts like
 Command-Q? Perhaps you maintain a GTK+ application and want to
 expand your user base to Mac users who want a Mac experience, not a
@@ -46,7 +45,7 @@ libraries with a single command.</p>
 
 <h3>All-in-one bundles</h3>
 <p><a href="http://live.gnome.org/GTK%2B/OSX/Bundling";>Bundling</a>
-with the <strong>gtk-mac-bundler</strong> is an easily configured python
+with the <strong>gtk-mac-bundler</strong>, an easily configured python
 program which creates an application bundle for you and populates it
 with your application executable and all of the dependent libraries
 from your GTK+ build, changing the installed names as needed to point