[gnome-user-docs] More grammar corrections from bug #662039



commit 6971a12e285537648085a640c171db39b1000834
Author: Richard Hughes <richard hughsie com>
Date:   Wed Oct 19 10:37:29 2011 +0100

    More grammar corrections from bug #662039

 gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page   |    6 +++---
 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
index 02872c8..1e0d5be 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-notifications.page
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
   </p>
   <p>
     To set the policy for display and printer devices, you specify the
-    maximum age of the policy in days:
+    maximum age of the profile in days:
   </p>
 
 <screen>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
index 023c3c3..b1acdc9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-virtualdevice.page
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
   <p>
     To create a virtual profile for a digital camera just drag and drop
-    on of the image files onto the <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui>
+    one of the image files onto the <guiseq><gui>System Settings</gui>
     <gui>Color</gui></guiseq> dialog.
     You can then <link xref="color-assignprofiles">assign profiles</link> to
     it like any other device or even
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
index 56b5980..e5c664d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/color-whatisspace.page
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@
   </p>
   <p>
     AdobeRGB is frequently used as an <em>editing space</em>.
-    It can encode more colors than sRGB, and means you adjust colors in
-    a photograph without worrying too much that the brightnest colors
-    are being clipped or the blacks crushed.
+    It can encode more colors than sRGB, which means you can change
+    colors in a photograph without worrying too much that the most vivid
+    colors are being clipped or the blacks crushed.
   </p>
   <p>
     PhoPhoto is the largest space available and is frequently used for



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