[gnome-games] [glines help] edits to gci-code in task.

[Tiffany Antopolski <antopolski src gnome org>]

commit f71ecad87dbcf7c8fd8f2df8c754ae003a09542a
Author: Tiffany Antopolski <tiffany antopolski gmail com>
Date:   Mon Jan 16 00:22:19 2012 -0500

    [glines help] edits to gci-code in task.

 glchess/help/C/change-board-orientation.page |   18 ++++++-----
 glchess/help/C/change-promotion-type.page    |   20 +++++++------
 glchess/help/C/intro.page                    |    9 +++--
 glchess/help/C/save-resume.page              |   40 +++++++++++++++----------
 4 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 37 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/glchess/help/C/change-board-orientation.page b/glchess/help/C/change-board-orientation.page
index 6405cc1..d72c51c 100644
--- a/glchess/help/C/change-board-orientation.page
+++ b/glchess/help/C/change-board-orientation.page
@@ -10,17 +10,19 @@
       <email>grohe43 gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change board orientation</title>
-  <list type="numbered">
-  <item><p>Select <em>Settings</em></p></item>
-  <item><p>Select <em>Preferences</em></p></item>
-  <item><p>Select the <em>Appearance</em> Tab</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select the dropdown next to <em>Board Orientation:</em></p></item>
-  <item><p>Select the desired orientation</p></item>
-  </list>
+   <steps>
+    <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select the <gui>Appearance</gui> tab</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select your desired <gui>Board Orientation</gui> from the dropdown menu.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
+   </steps>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/glchess/help/C/change-promotion-type.page b/glchess/help/C/change-promotion-type.page
index 21d4b23..3a49bff 100644
--- a/glchess/help/C/change-promotion-type.page
+++ b/glchess/help/C/change-promotion-type.page
@@ -10,17 +10,19 @@
       <email>grohe43 gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc></desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Change promotion type</title>
-  <p>The promotion type is what a pawn gets promoted too when it reaches the opposite side of the board. Too change it:
-</p>
-<list type="numbered">
-<item><p>Select the <em>Settings</em> menu</p></item>
-<item><p>Select <em>Preferences</em></p></item>
-<item><p>Select the dropdown next to the text <em>Promotion Type:</em></p></item>
-<item><p>Select the desired promotion type</p></item>
-</list>
+    <p>To change the <link xref="rules#promotion">promotion type</link> of the pawn:</p>
+      <steps>
+       <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Settings</gui><gui>Preferences</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Select the <gui>Game</gui> tab.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Select your desired <gui>Promotion Type</gui> from the dropdown menu.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Click <gui>Close</gui>.</p></item>
+     </steps>
 </page>
diff --git a/glchess/help/C/intro.page b/glchess/help/C/intro.page
index f469ead..1507070 100644
--- a/glchess/help/C/intro.page
+++ b/glchess/help/C/intro.page
@@ -10,12 +10,13 @@
       <email>grohe43 gmail com</email>
       <years>2012</years>
     </credit>
-
-    <desc></desc>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
   </info>
 
   <title>Introduction</title>
-
-<p>glChess is a chess game from gnome. Games can be played between human and computer players. glChess detects known third party <link type="topic" xref="chess-engines">chess engines</link> for computer players. You can also play other people over a <link type="topic" xref="chess-engines">network</link> connection or on the same computer.</p>
+    <p><app>GlChess</app> is GNOME's chess game. It lets you play against the computer or another person. GlChess can detect known <link xref="chess-engines">chess engines</link> for computer players. It also allows you to play against other people over a <link xref="chess-engines">network</link>.</p>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/glchess/help/C/save-resume.page b/glchess/help/C/save-resume.page
index 3bc081f..8bfeb18 100644
--- a/glchess/help/C/save-resume.page
+++ b/glchess/help/C/save-resume.page
@@ -10,6 +10,11 @@
       <name>Brian Grohe</name>
       <email>grohe43 gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
+      <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
+
     <license>
       <p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
     </license>
@@ -17,22 +22,25 @@
 
 <title>Save and resume</title>
     
-<section id="save">
-<title>Saving your game</title>
-<list type="numbered">
-<item><p>Go to the <em>Game</em> menu</p></item>
-<item><p>Select <em>Save As</em></p></item>
-<item><p>Enter the desired and click <em>Save</em></p></item>
-</list>
-</section>
+  <section id="save">
+    <title>Saving your game</title>
+      <p>To save your game:</p>
+      <steps>
+        <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Save As</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Select a location for your game. It is best to save it in a location you will easily remember for future retrieval.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Click <gui>Save</gui>.</p></item>
+      </steps>
+  </section>
 
-<section id="resume">
-<title>Resuming your game</title>
-<list type="numbered">
-<item><p>Go to the <em>Game</em> menu</p></item>
-<item><p>Select <em>Open</em></p></item>
-<item><p>Select the desired file and click <em>Open</em></p></item>
-</list>
-</section>
+  <section id="resume">
+    <title>Resuming your game</title>
+      <p>To resume a previously saved game:</p>
+     <steps>
+       <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>Game</gui><gui>Open</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Ensure the <gui>All Files</gui> option is selected in the Files view.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Select the file for your saved game.</p></item>
+       <item><p>Click <gui>Open</gui>.</p></item>
+     </steps>
+  </section>
 
 </page>