[release-notes/gnome-3-4] Fix and remove some stuff after review by shaunm

[Andre Klapper <aklapper src gnome org>]

commit 51d437369177009a463176514fe2f735419a106e
Author: Andre Klapper <a9016009 gmx de>
Date:   Wed Mar 21 17:43:02 2012 +0100

    Fix and remove some stuff after review by shaunm

 help/C/rndevelopers.xml |   12 ------------
 help/C/rnusers.xml      |   15 +++------------
 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
index 724555f..b4dafbe 100644
--- a/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rndevelopers.xml
@@ -186,18 +186,6 @@ Python bindings to using introspection.
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect2>
 
-	<sect2 id="devel-docs">
-	  <title>Improved Developer Documentation</title>
-<!-- http://git.gnome.org/browse/gnome-devel-docs/commit/?id=c5e43559c0d79f01764a720c9c99b733fbb0e17a -->
-    <para>
-      The GNOME platform overview in the 
-      <ulink url="http://developer.gnome.org/";>GNOME Developer Center</ulink> 
-      has been reorganized to make it easier to start GNOME development in one 
-      of the featured languages C, C++, Python, JavaScript or Vala.
-      Also, the JavaScript tutorials have received many improvements.
-    </para>
-  </sect2>
-
 	<sect2 id="misc-devs">
 	  <title>Miscellaneous Developer Updates</title>
 		<para>Other GNOME Platform improvements in GNOME &gnomeversion; include:
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index b6ce3bb..ed40cb3 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
     menus.
   </para>
   <para>
-    Other highlights for this release include a new document search facility, smooth scrolling,
-    a new application, called Boxes, video calling, and a new animated background that updates 
+    Other highlights for this release include a new document search facility,
+    a new application called Boxes, video calling, and a new animated background that updates 
     over the course of the day. Enjoy!
   </para>
 
@@ -146,15 +146,6 @@
       <application>Web</application> and <application>Contacts</application>, are 
       already making use of application menus for this release.
     </para>
-    <note id="rnusers.application-menus.focus-follows-mouse">
-      <title>Focus-follows-mouse Users</title>
-      <para>
-        An exception will be made for <ulink
-          url="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Focus_%28computing%29#Focus_follows_pointer";>focus-follows-mouse</ulink>
-        users; for them, the menus will not be hidden. This as a hidden menu bar
-        is more difficult to use together with focus-follows-mouse.
-      </para>
-    </note>
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="rnusers.interface-components">
@@ -476,7 +467,7 @@ http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution/commit/?id=e0548d2 and https://bugzilla.gn
         </para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>
           <application>Evolution</application>'s account setup assistant will also automatically 
-          detect common email providers, making it less work to setup your email account. As an added 
+          detect common email providers, making it less work to set up your email account. As an added 
           bonus, it will now also let you reorder your email accounts in the sidebar.
           </para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>