[release-notes/gnome-3-6] users core - improve wording of the And More section

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 296d53e51828531df473a5101a1c82a7d4f0ba98
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 17 15:00:29 2012 +0100

    users core - improve wording of the And More section

 help/C/users-core.page |   44 +++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/users-core.page b/help/C/users-core.page
index aa3c9c4..ff3a0dc 100644
--- a/help/C/users-core.page
+++ b/help/C/users-core.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#users.core" group="#last"/>
-    <desc>Smaller changes</desc>
+    <desc>A truck load of smaller enhancements.</desc>
     <credit type="author">
       <name its:translate="no">Olav Vitters</name>
       <email its:translate="no">olav vitters nl</email>
@@ -19,45 +19,51 @@
   <title>And more...</title>
 
   <p>
-    There are dozens of smaller tweaks and improvements that have
-    been applied throughout GNOME to improve the user experience.
-    The following are just a few examples.
+    GNOME 3.6 includes many smaller changes, including bug fixes as well as enhancements. 
+    Together, these add up to a general improvement in the user experience. The following are 
+    just a few examples.
   </p>
 
   <list>
     <item><p>
-      For people who like <link
-      href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Easter_egg_%28media%29";>easter
-      eggs</link> and are quick with their mouse, test if you can find it.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>
-      Certain dialogs such as <gui>About</gui> dialogs have to be dismissed
-      before you can interact with the application. In GNOME 3.6, the rest of
-      the application will fade out to make this clearer.
-    </p></item>
-    <item><p>
       The mnemonics underlines that become visible when you press <key>Alt</key>
       wait for a split second before appearing now, to avoid flickering
       when <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>Tab</key></keyseq> or
       <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>PrintScreen</key></keyseq> is used.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>
+      The appearance of the drop-down calendar that is accessible from the top bar 
+      has been refined, making it easier to read, better looking, and easier to interact 
+      with.
+    </p></item>
+    <item><p>
       Password dialogs when mounting remote locations or encrypted
       drives are now presented in the same system style as other
       password dialogs.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>
-      The <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Left</key></keyseq>,
+      In the Activities Overview, a clearer highlight effect has been added to the active 
+      workspace.
+    </p></item>
+    <item><p>
+      New keyboard shortcuts have been added for changing the size of windows, including 
+      <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Left</key></keyseq>,
       <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Right</key></keyseq>,
       <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Up</key></keyseq>,
-      <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Down</key></keyseq>
-      keyboard shortcuts for maximizing and tiling windows are more flexible.
+      <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>Down</key></keyseq>.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>
-      The access points in the network menu are sorted by strength.
+      The access points in the network menu are sorted by strength, making it easier 
+      to find networks that are close by.
+    </p></item>
+    <item><p>
+      For people who like <link
+      href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Easter_egg_%28media%29";>easter eggs</link>, we 
+      have added something fun. You'll need to be quick with their mouse: test to see if you can find it.
     </p></item>
     <item><p>
-      The screen reader can be activated from the universal access menu.
+      The style of modal dialogs has been changed to better integrate with the rest of 
+      the experience. They also feature stylish new animations.
     </p></item>
   </list>