[seahorse/mallard-help: 301/337] Changes to about-key-servers.page

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit 4463a94d6b975828c0b60303a5ad43ec997209d6
Author: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 20 16:43:06 2013 +0530

    Changes to about-key-servers.page
    
    Shortened introductory paragraph.
    Edited the list of default key servers.
    Reflowed, reworded bits of paragraphs.

 help/C/about-key-servers.page |   34 +++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/about-key-servers.page b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
index b1cccaa..9a014b5 100644
--- a/help/C/about-key-servers.page
+++ b/help/C/about-key-servers.page
@@ -23,14 +23,13 @@
 
   <title>Key servers</title>
 
-  <p>Key servers are storage spaces on the Internet that help you to store and
-  retrieve public keys. When you create a new public key you can choose to
-  submit it to a key server. When you do this, the key server notifies the
-  location of your public key to other key servers. This makes it easier for
-  people to import your public key and use it to encrypt all of their
-  communication with you. You can also import someone's public key if you have
-  certain details about them, like their user ID or key ID. There are several
-  key servers present globally, and each of them is equipped with an Internet
+  <p>Key servers are computers that store public encryption keys, and share
+  copies of them with other key servers. When you create a new public key you
+  can submit it to a key server via the Internet. When you do this, the key
+  server stores your public key and also shares it with other key servers. This
+  makes it easy for people to <link xref="misc-key-import">import</link> your
+  public key from any key server and use it to encrypt and send files and
+  messages to you. Every key server can be accessed through an Internet
   address(URL) which can be used to submit or import public keys.</p>
 
   <p><app>Passwords and Keys</app> provides you an interface to
@@ -38,20 +37,17 @@
   find and <link xref="pgp-retrieve-remote">retrieve a remote key</link>.
   You can also use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to sync the keys in your
   keyring with the key server so that they are updated when someone
-  <link xref="about-key-signing">signs</link> them or modifies them in some other
-  way.</p>
+  <link xref="about-key-signing">signs</link> them or modifies them in some
+  other way.</p>
 
   <list>
     <title>Default key servers on <app>Passwords and Keys</app></title>
-      <item>
-        <p>hkp://keyserver.ubuntu.com:11371</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>hkp://pool.sks-keyservers.net</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>ldap://keyserver.pgp.com</p>
-      </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>hkp://pool.sks-keyservers.net</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>ldap://keyserver.pgp.com</p>
+    </item>
   </list>
 
   <note style="info">