[gnome-devel-docs/dx-hackfest] platform-overview: Slight update to the D-Bus page

[Federico Mena Quintero <federico src gnome org>]

commit 10ceaf1a5b2c87ef786fdd4824ea2d4da3da5291
Author: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>
Date:   Fri Feb 1 16:55:37 2013 +0100

    platform-overview: Slight update to the D-Bus page
    
    Signed-off-by: Federico Mena Quintero <federico gnome org>

 platform-overview/C/d-bus.page |    8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/platform-overview/C/d-bus.page b/platform-overview/C/d-bus.page
index 1f13031..bfe29b7 100644
--- a/platform-overview/C/d-bus.page
+++ b/platform-overview/C/d-bus.page
@@ -9,19 +9,19 @@
 
 <title>D-Bus</title>
 
-<p>D-Bus is a cross-desktop message bus for sending events between
+<p>D-Bus is a message bus for sending messages between
 various applications, the desktop, and low-level components of the system.
 D-Bus provides a simple API for sending messages to particular services
 and for broadcasting messages to all interested services.  D-Bus enables
 different types of applications to communicate and integrate with each
 other and with the desktop, providing better interaction and a richer
-experience for the user.</p>
+experience for the user.  </p>
 
-<p>D-Bus provides a session and a system bus.  The session bus is
+<p>D-Bus provides a session bus and a system bus.  The session bus is
 used by applications in a single user session, allowing them to share
 data and event notifications and to integrate into the user's desktop.
 For example, movie players can send a D-Bus message to prevent the
-screensaver from activating when the user is watching a movie.</p>
+screensaver from activating while the user is watching a movie.</p>
 
 <p>The system bus is a single message bus which runs independently of
 any user sessions.  It can communicate with applications in any session,