[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] help: review pref-menubar.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 596bc54644353d6bffc48401be43e9aa7edfb99a
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 16 22:17:06 2013 +0000

    help: review pref-menubar.page

 help/C/pref-menubar.page |   47 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 30 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-menubar.page b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
index 7532a56..8568bf5 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-menubar.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-menubar.page
@@ -19,34 +19,47 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="adv-keyboards-access"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="app-fullscreen"/>
 
-    <desc>How to hide and restore the <gui>Menubar</gui></desc>
+    <!-- Menubar is not a proper noun! -->
+    <desc>How to hide and restore the menubar.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
-  <title><gui>Menubar</gui> visibility</title>
+  <title>Menubar visibility</title>
 
-  <p>You can enable or disable <gui>Menubar</gui> as desired.</p>
+  <p>You can enable or disable the menubar as desired, this may be useful if
+  you use a device with a small screen. To hide the menubar:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>To disable <gui>Menubar</gui>, go to <guiseq><gui
-  style="menu">View</gui></guiseq> and select <gui style="menuitem">Show
-  Menubar</gui>.</p>
-      <note style="important"><p>The tick mark in the menu option indicates that
-      the <gui>Menubar</gui> is currently set to visible.</p>
-       </note>
+      <p>Select <gui style="menu">View</gui> and deselect
+      <gui style="menuitem">Show Menubar</gui>.</p>
     </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <p>To restore the menubar:</p>
+
+  <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>To enable <gui>Menubar</gui>, right click in <app>Terminal</app> and
-      select <gui style="menuitem">Show Menubar</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Right click in <app>Terminal</app> and select
+      <gui style="menuitem">Show Menubar</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>To enable the menubar by default in all <app>Terminal</app> windows you
-    open, go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-    style="menuitem">Preferences</gui><gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>
-    and select <gui>Show menubar by default in new terminals</gui>.</p>
-  </note>
+  <p>To enable the menubar by default in all <app>Terminal</app> windows that
+  you open:</p>
+
+  <!-- Make sure that you copy the <gui> elements correctly, including any
+  elipsis -->
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferencesâ</gui>
+      <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Tick the checkbox next to <gui>Show menubar by default in new
+      terminals</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
 
 </page>