[gnome-user-docs] Status-icons.page reviewed and categorized

From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
To: commits-list gnome org
Cc:
Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Status-icons.page reviewed and categorized
Date: Sat, 23 Feb 2013 17:41:45 +0000 (UTC)
commit 94aac115ba20c065c522232b6375fd81ecbff0a1
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Sat Feb 23 18:21:34 2013 +0100

    Status-icons.page reviewed and categorized

 gnome-help/C/status-icons.page |   67 +++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 34 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page b/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
index 448e59b..7b8ee87 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/status-icons.page
@@ -2,7 +2,9 @@
       type="topic" style="ui"
       id="status-icons">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2012-04-08" status="review"/>
+    <link type="guide" xref="shell-overview#desktop"/>
+
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-23" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Monica Kochofar</name>
@@ -12,15 +14,15 @@
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>A description that explains the meanings of the icons located on the right of the top bar.</desc>
+    <desc>Explains the meanings of the icons located on the right of the top bar.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What do the icons in the top bar mean?</title>
-<p>This section will explain the icons located on the top right of the screen, specifically the different 
variations of the icons that are possible. </p>
+<p>This section explains the meaning of icons located on the top right corner of the screen. More 
specifically, the different variations of the icons provided by the GNOME interface are described.</p>
 
 <media type="image" src="figures/top-bar-icons.png"
        width="395" height="70" style="floatend">
-  <p>GNOME shell top bar</p>
+  <p>GNOME Shell top bar</p>
 </media>
 
 <links type="section"/>
@@ -31,15 +33,13 @@
  <table shade="rows">
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/preferences-desktop-accessibility-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Leads to a menu that turns on distinct accessibility settings.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Leads to a menu that turns on accessibility settings.</p></td>
     </tr>
     
   </table>
 </section>
 
 
-
-
 <section id="audioicons">
 <title>Volume Control Icons</title>
 
@@ -66,14 +66,13 @@
 </section>
 
 
-
 <section id="bluetoothicons">
 <title>Bluetooth Manager Icons</title>
 
  <table shade="rows">
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/bluetooth-active-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Bluetooth is active.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Bluetooth has been activated.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/bluetooth-disabled-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -85,28 +84,28 @@
 <section id="networkicons">
 <title>Network Manager Icons</title>
 <p></p>
-<p><app>Cellular Connections</app></p>
+<p><app>Cellular Connection</app></p>
  <table shade="rows">
 
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-3g-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to 3G network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a 3G network.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-4g-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to 4G network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a 4G network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-edge-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to EDGE network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to an EDGE network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-gprs-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to GPRS network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a GPRS network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-umts-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to UMTS network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a UMTS network.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-connected-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -114,7 +113,7 @@
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-cellular-acquiring-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Acquiring cellular network connection.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Acquiring a cellular network connection.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-cellular-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -140,15 +139,15 @@
 
 
 
-<p><app>Local Area Network Connections</app></p>
+<p><app>Local Area Network (LAN) Connection</app></p>
  <table shade="rows">
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-error-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>There was an error in finding the network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>There has been an error in finding the network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-idle-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The network is idle.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The network is inactive.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-no-route-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -160,29 +159,29 @@
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-receive-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The network is receiving.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The network is receiving data.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-transmit-receive-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The network is transmitting and receiving.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The network is transmitting and receiving data.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-transmit-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The network is transmitting.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The network is transmitting data.</p></td>
     </tr>
 </table>
 
 
 
-<p><app>Virtual Private Network Connection</app></p>
+<p><app>Virtual Private Network (VPN) Connection</app></p>
  <table shade="rows">
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-vpn-acquiring-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Acquiring network connection.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Acquiring a network connection.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-vpn-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to VPN network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a VPN network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 </table>
 
@@ -191,15 +190,15 @@
  <table shade="rows">
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wired-acquiring-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Acquiring network connection.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Acquiring a network connection.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wired-disconnected-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Disconnected from network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Disconnected from the network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wired-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to wired network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a wired network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 </table>
 
@@ -208,7 +207,7 @@
  <table shade="rows">
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wireless-acquiring-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Acquiring wireless connection.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Acquiring a wireless connection.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wireless-encrypted-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -216,7 +215,7 @@
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/network-wireless-connected-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Connected to wireless network.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Connected to a wireless network.</p></td>
     </tr>
 <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -260,7 +259,7 @@
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/battery-caution-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>Caution: Battery is very low.</p></td>
+      <td><p>Caution: The battery is very low.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/battery-empty-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -268,11 +267,11 @@
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/battery-missing-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The battery is missing.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The battery has been unplugged.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/battery-full-charged-symbolic.svg"/></td>
-      <td><p>The battery is full and charged.</p></td>
+      <td><p>The battery is fully charged.</p></td>
     </tr>
     <tr>
       <td><media type="image" mime="image/svg" src="figures/battery-full-charging-symbolic.svg"/></td>
@@ -300,4 +299,4 @@
 </section>
 
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
[Date Prev][Date Next] [Thread Prev][Thread Next] [Thread Index] [Date Index] [Author Index]