[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 49/55] docs: revised radio-stations-add page for clarity

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit 3a36fcc7e979a7191b9ca73301a8dfb79c9d7720
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sat Dec 15 13:25:50 2012 -0600

    docs: revised radio-stations-add page for clarity

 help/C/radio-stations-add.page |   32 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-add.page b/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
index c228802..ae236c5 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-add.page
@@ -8,10 +8,15 @@
     <desc>Add a new Internet radio station.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.1" date="2010-07-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.0" version="0.2" date="2010-07-27" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.6" date="2012-12-15" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Milo Casagrande</name>
       <email>milo ubuntu com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="author">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
     <license>
       <p>
         Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0
@@ -22,26 +27,29 @@
   <title>Add a radio station</title>
   
   <p>
-    Before you can add a new Internet radio station, it is necessary to have the
-    Internet address of the radio station you want to add.
-  </p>
-  <p>
-    The Internet address should be available on the radio station website.
+    Before you can add a new Internet radio station, you will need to have
+    the Internet address of the radio station. The radio station's Internet
+    address should be available on the radio station website.
   </p>
   
   <note>
     <p>
-      Usually the radio station address is not the radio station website address.
-      That address should be provided as an <app>iTunes</app>, <app>Windows Media Player</app>,
-      or <app>Winamp</app> address.
+      Usually the radio station address is not the radio station website
+      address. The address that you need for <app>Rhythmbox</app> should be
+      provided as an <app>iTunes</app>, <app>Windows Media Player</app>, or
+      <app>Winamp</app> address. Sometimes you have to look through several 
+      pages of the radio station website to find the address.
     </p>
   </note>
   
   <p>
-    With the radio station Internet address available:
+    As an example, here is the address for the <em>WBEZ, Chicago Public Radio
+    </em> audio stream:
+    <code>http://wbez.ic.llnwd.net/stream/wbez_91_5_fm</code>
   </p>
   
   <steps>
+    <title>With the radio station Internet address available:</title>
     <item>
       <p>
         Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Music</gui>
@@ -56,6 +64,8 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
   
-
-  
+  <p>
+    The radio station will be added to the list of existing stations. You can
+    double-click the name of the new station to begin playing it.
+  </p>
 </page>