[rhythmbox/mallard-help: 51/55] docs: revised radio-stations-listen and radio-what-is for clarity
- From: David King <davidk src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [rhythmbox/mallard-help: 51/55] docs: revised radio-stations-listen and radio-what-is for clarity
- Date: Sun, 24 Feb 2013 21:10:26 +0000 (UTC)
commit 51713e4931a08b1d235753cd224c7896edfa2225
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date: Sat Dec 15 14:51:09 2012 -0600
docs: revised radio-stations-listen and radio-what-is for clarity
help/C/radio-stations-listen.page | 7 ++++---
help/C/radio-what-is.page | 8 ++++----
2 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
index ee55d9c..46d36db 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-stations-listen.page
@@ -28,9 +28,10 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>
- Before you can start listening to the radio station, <app>Rhythmbox</app> needs
- to download from the Internet the audio stream. The time taken to download that
- audio stream depends on your Internet connection.
+ Before you can start listening to the radio station, <app>Rhythmbox
+ </app> needs to download the audio stream from the Internet. This is
+ called <em>buffering</em>. The time it takes to buffer the audio
+ stream depends on the speed of your Internet connection.
</p>
</item>
</steps>
diff --git a/help/C/radio-what-is.page b/help/C/radio-what-is.page
index e86f785..93398b2 100644
--- a/help/C/radio-what-is.page
+++ b/help/C/radio-what-is.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="radio-stations" group="two"/>
<desc>What is an internet radio station?</desc>
- <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.8" date="2012-09-15" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.8" date="2012-12-15" status="draft"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
<email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
@@ -24,8 +24,8 @@
<p>Internet radio stations are similar to regular radio stations, but the
music is streamed to your computer through a network rather than over the
- air. Internet radio stations can be a simultaneous stream of a regular radio
- station, an amateur broadcasting their own station, or commercial
- internet radio stations that include live DJs and even commercials.</p>
+ air. Internet radio stations can be a stream of a regular radio station, an
+ amateur broadcasting their own station, or commercial internet radio stations
+ that include live DJs and even commercials.</p>
</page>
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