[gnome-terminal/mallard-help: 6/58] help: review
- From: Sindhu S <sindhus src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-terminal/mallard-help: 6/58] help: review
- Date: Sat, 26 Jan 2013 09:50:40 +0000 (UTC)
commit eaf907a1dc45ea9474bed25b1df2f05a4b133618
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date: Tue Jan 8 19:51:19 2013 +0000
help: review
Comments added to the relevant files and some minor fixes.
help/C/index.page | 2 ++
help/C/introduction.page | 23 +++++++++++++++++++++--
help/C/legal.xml | 1 +
3 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index c9ad5cb..852ea54 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -12,4 +12,6 @@
<title>Advanced Settings</title>
</section>
+<!-- It is relatively traditional to have a troubleshooting section here. -->
+
</page>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index ca8062e..f9a7d24 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -9,6 +9,11 @@
<email>sindhus live in</email>
<years>2013</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+ <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+ <years>2013</years>
+ </credit>
<link type="guide" xref="index"/>
@@ -16,15 +21,29 @@
</info>
<title>Introduction</title>
+
+<!-- The application is called <app>Terminal</app> in the menu, so we should
+ use that instead of 'GNOME Terminal'. -->
+
+ <p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulator application that you can use to
+ access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under the
+ GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
- <p>GNOME Terminal is a terminal emulation application that you can use to access a UNIX shell environment and run any application available under GNOME Desktop environment.</p>
+ <p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a
+ text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position
+ and colors.</p>
- <p>GNOME <app>Terminal</app> emulates the xterm. In turn, xterm emulates a text terminal with support for escape sequences that control cursor position and colors.</p>
+<!-- You are saying here that an emulator is emulating an emulator, which is a
+ bit confusing. Improve the first sentence, maybe even merging it into the
+ second one. -->
<table>
<tr>
<td>
<media type="image" src="figures/gnome-terminal.png" width="700">
+<!-- The screenshot should be only of the application itself, not the whole
+ desktop. You can use the 'Take screenshot' application to automatically
+ take a screenshot only of the selected window. -->
<p>Screenshot of GNOME <app>Terminal</app></p>
</media>
</td>
diff --git a/help/C/legal.xml b/help/C/legal.xml
index e1c4a93..9f1ed73 100644
--- a/help/C/legal.xml
+++ b/help/C/legal.xml
@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+<!-- This page needs updating to reflect the new GPL and CC dual licence that we are using. -->
<legalnotice id="legalnotice">
<para>
Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this
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