[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 54/163] help: final review of pref-title.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit ae3a83dd7e2786455f9ea5bdc49dd0d48cc7e6df
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 17 19:49:41 2013 +0000

    help: final review of pref-title.page

 help/C/pref-title.page |   18 ++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-title.page b/help/C/pref-title.page
index 52fb2a3..591df9b 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-title.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-title.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-title">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -24,10 +24,12 @@
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> title</title>
 
+  <!-- The default behaviour that I see in my fresh in stall of the terminal is
+  different, and so is the behaviour in my stable installation. For things like
+  this, it is better not to specify the behaviour as it can vary depending on
+  the distribution. -->
   <p><app>Terminal</app> can allow commands to set the name of your
-  <app>Terminal</app> tab or window. The title of <app>Terminal</app>tab or
-  window by default displays information about the computer. You can override
-  this by setting your own initial title.</p>
+  <app>Terminal</app> tab or window.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -36,7 +38,7 @@
       <gui style="tab">Title and Command</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Enter the title that you wish the <app>Terminal</app> to display at
+      <p>Enter the title that you wish <app>Terminal</app> to display at
       startup or on opening a new tab next to <gui>Initial title:</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -55,11 +57,11 @@
         <item>
           <title><gui>Prepend initial title</gui></title>
           <p>The title will consist of the initial title followed by the title
-    set by the currently executing command.</p>
+          set by the currently executing command.</p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title><gui>Keep initial title</gui></title>
-          <p>The initial title set by the user will be retained.</p>
+          <p>The initial title which is set by the user will be retained.</p>
         </item>
       </terms>
       <p>Your selection will be saved and applied immediately.</p>
@@ -70,4 +72,4 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>