[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 170/225] Help: review app-fullscreen

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 03fe7b6f3792e66fb3eb5fa111767b85d7529795
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 11:08:31 2013 -0500

    Help: review app-fullscreen

 help/C/app-fullscreen.page |   17 +++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-fullscreen.page b/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
index e13c1fa..681d6d9 100644
--- a/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
+++ b/help/C/app-fullscreen.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="app-fullscreen">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="pref-menubar"/>
 
@@ -17,6 +17,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Enable fullscreen mode</desc>
   </info>
@@ -25,9 +30,9 @@
 
   <p>Fullscreen mode allows <app>Terminal</app> to use the entire screen.</p>
 
-  <p>If you have a device with limited screen space and intend to work in
-  <app>Terminal</app> for long duration or are working with long lines of
-  terminal output, this mode is useful to temporarily hide the window
+  <p>This mode is useful if you have a device with limited screen space and
+  intend to work in <app>Terminal</app> for a long duration, or are working with
+  long lines of terminal output. It temporarily hides the window
   decoration, allowing you to view more <link xref="pref-scrolling">scrollback
   lines</link> on the screen.</p>
 
@@ -36,7 +41,7 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui style="menu">View</gui> and check
-      <gui style="menuitem">Full Screen</gui> or press <key>F11</key>.</p>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Full Screen</gui>, or press <key>F11</key>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -55,7 +60,7 @@
   <steps>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui style="menu">View</gui> and uncheck
-      <gui style="menuitem">Full Screen</gui> or right click and select
+      <gui style="menuitem">Full Screen</gui>, or right click and select
       <gui style="menuitem">Leave Full Screen</gui>. Alternatively,
       press <key>F11</key>.</p>
     </item>