[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 170/194] Help: review app-terminal-sizes

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 5cbb3109b4027f481ddbf5f52ff7685930f6778a
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 05:19:33 2013 -0500

    Help: review app-terminal-sizes

 help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page |   28 ++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
index 8ad2d63..20e6fdc 100644
--- a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
+++ b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="app-terminal-sizes">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="adv-keyboardshortcuts"/>
@@ -24,14 +29,14 @@
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
 
-  <p>You may require <app>Terminal</app> windows to be of a particular size
-  when you work with certain command line applications that have minimum
-  terminal size requirements in order to display correctly or if you want to
+  <p>If you work with certain command line applications that have minimum
+  terminal size requirements in order to display correctly, or if you want to
   view long lines of terminal output with minimal line breaks on your
-  display.</p>
+  display, you may require <app>Terminal</app> windows to be of a particular
+  size.</p>
 
-  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to some presets
-  presets:</p>
+  <p>You can change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to some preset
+  values:</p>
   
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -77,11 +82,10 @@
     <p>Check <gui>Use custom default terminal size</gui>.</p>
    </item>
    <item>
-     <p>You can set <gui>Default size</gui> columns and rows by typing the
-     desired number of columns and rows in the input boxes next to <gui>Default
-     size:</gui> for <gui>columns</gui> and <gui>rows</gui>. You can also click
-     on <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase or <gui style="button">-</gui>
-     to decrease the size.</p>
+     <p>Set <gui>Default size</gui> by typing the desired number of columns and 
+     rows in the corresponding input boxes. You can also click
+     <gui style="button">+</gui> to increase or <gui style="button">-</gui> to
+     decrease the size.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>