[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 201/225] Help: review gs-execute-commands

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 1ea39b52bd9a927212fc241fc2fd2a2f0511f7af
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Tue Feb 26 07:54:54 2013 -0500

    Help: review gs-execute-commands

 help/C/gs-execute-commands.page |   16 ++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
index fde4388..e8d1476 100644
--- a/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
+++ b/help/C/gs-execute-commands.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="gs-execute-commands">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#getting-started"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="txt-copy-paste"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="overview"/>
@@ -18,6 +18,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Launch programs or run commands using <app>Terminal</app></desc>
   </info>
@@ -39,11 +44,10 @@
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <p>You may want to run programs in the terminal if they end abruptly without
-  any warning or error message: running these programs using
-  <app>Terminal</app> will allow the program to output any error or debugging
-  messages to the <app>Terminal</app> window.  This information can be helpful
-  when filing a bug report.</p>
+  <p>If you have a program that ends abruptly without any warning or error,
+  you may want to run it in <app>Terminal</app>. This will allow the program to
+  output any error or debugging messages to the <app>Terminal</app> window. This
+  information can be helpful when filing a bug report.</p>
 
   <note style="tip">
     <!-- Using "see *link*" is poor style, use inline links as below. -->