[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 49/222] help: review txt-copy-paste.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 54afadd855fa9b851f96b2b1d8f0c0ba0994c9f3
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 9 08:41:54 2013 +0000

    help: review txt-copy-paste.page

 help/C/txt-copy-paste.page |   22 ++++++++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/txt-copy-paste.page b/help/C/txt-copy-paste.page
index 81383d0..47d77a0 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-copy-paste.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-copy-paste.page
@@ -9,6 +9,11 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#textoutput"/>
 <!--The title and description NEEDS-WORK -->
@@ -18,19 +23,24 @@
 
   <title>Transfer text</title>
 
+<!-- Add short intro, something along the lines of "You can copy and paste text
+     in a terminal like in other applications, but the terminal keyboard
+     shortcuts for this differ." -->
+
   <terms>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Copy</gui></title>
-      <p>Click and drag your mouse pointer through the text portions you wish to
-      copy, then go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Copy</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, you can press
+      <p>Highlight <!-- not everyone uses a mouse! --> the text portions you
+      wish to copy, then select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Copy</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, you can press
       <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key><key>C</key></keyseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <title><gui>Paste</gui></title>
-      <p>Right click in the <app>Terminal</app> and click <guiseq><gui
-      style="menuitem">Paste</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, you can press
-      <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key><key>V</key></keyseq>.</p>
+      <p>Right click in the <app>Terminal</app> and click
+      <guiseq><gui style="menuitem">Paste</gui></guiseq>. Alternatively, you
+      can press <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>Shift</key>
+      <key>V</key></keyseq>.</p>
     </item>
   </terms>