[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 161/234] help: review app-zoom.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit b2cb504a191d79c9be584a5a891eef9ff22aafce
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 23 19:55:52 2013 +0100

    help: review app-zoom.page

 help/C/app-zoom.page |   39 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-zoom.page b/help/C/app-zoom.page
index 0637081..6c7c0c8 100644
--- a/help/C/app-zoom.page
+++ b/help/C/app-zoom.page
@@ -9,24 +9,28 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimomva</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
 
-    <desc>Enlarge or shrink text size</desc>
+    <desc>Increase or decrease text size.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
 
-  <title>Zoom in or out in <app>Terminal</app></title>
-
+  <title>Zoom in and zoom out</title>
+<!-- Give keyboard shortcuts for zooming, like you did for resetting, then
+change status to review. -->
   <p>To increase <app>Terminal</app> text size:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <gui style="menu">View</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Zoom in</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Zoom in</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
@@ -34,28 +38,25 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <gui style="menu">View</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Zoom out</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">View</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Zoom out</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Alternatively, you can access the <gui style="menuitem">Zoom in</gui> and <gui style="menuitem">Zoom 
out</gui> by pressing
-  <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>+</key></keyseq> or
-  <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>-</key></keyseq> respectively.</p>
+    <p>Alternatively, you can access the <gui style="menuitem">Zoom in</gui>
+    and <gui style="menuitem">Zoom out</gui> by pressing
+    <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>+</key></keyseq> or
+    <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>-</key></keyseq> respectively.</p>
   </note>
 
   <p>To restore <app>Terminal</app> text to default size:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <gui style="View">View</gui>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <gui style="menuitem">Normal Size</gui> or
-  press <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>0</key></keyseq>.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="View">View</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Normal Size</gui></guiseq> or press 
+      <keyseq><key>Control</key><key>0</key></keyseq>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>