[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 172/234] Help: review pref-title

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 97fcce204434da0284caf570e30b5e4ff83121e3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 24 06:29:15 2013 -0500

    Help: review pref-title

 help/C/pref-title.page |   14 ++++++++++----
 1 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-title.page b/help/C/pref-title.page
index fa0fd74..2939d64 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-title.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-title.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-title">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-18" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-18" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -14,6 +14,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
@@ -25,7 +30,8 @@
   <title><app>Terminal</app> title</title>
 
   <p><app>Terminal</app> can allow commands to set the name of your
-  <app>Terminal</app> tab or window.</p>
+  <app>Terminal</app> tab or window. This title will display at
+      startup or on opening a new tab.</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -34,8 +40,8 @@
       <gui style="tab">Title and Command</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Enter the title that you wish <app>Terminal</app> to display at
-      startup or on opening a new tab next to <gui>Initial title:</gui>.</p>
+      <p>Next to <gui>Initial title</gui>, enter the title that you wish
+      <app>Terminal</app> to display.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select one of the following options:</p>