[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 47/202] help: review pref-encoding.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 51d82a0e683a5b84d34a353707fb8cddd3b4ca68
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Feb 15 00:59:13 2013 +0000

    help: review pref-encoding.page

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diff --git a/help/C/pref-encoding.page b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
index 385183f..fc50c2a 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-encoding.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
@@ -9,29 +9,56 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <desc>Enable a new character support</desc>
+    <desc>Change to a different character set support</desc>
 
   </info>
 
   <title>Character encoding</title>
 
-  <p>You may want to change character encoding in <app>Terminal</app> in the following scenarios...</p>
+  <p>You may want to change character encoding in <app>Terminal</app> if you:</p>
+
+<!-- CLI? The first three items are not valid due to UTF-8 including all Unicode
+characters. -->
 
   <list>
-    <item><p>You work with CLI applications that output text in languages other than English.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You want to input text in languages other than English.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You are working with file or directory names that use characters unavailable in the default 
UTF-8 encoding.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You are using an external hard disk that has contents that use different encoding.</p></item>
-    <item><p>You are connecting to a remote computer that uses a different encoding.</p></item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You work with CLI applications that output text in languages other
+      than English.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You want to input text in languages other than English.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>You are working with file or directory names that use characters
+      unavailable in the default UTF-8 encoding.</p>
+      <!-- <p>Work with file or directories that have names which
+      are encoded in a different character encoding than you are using.</p> -->
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Use an external hard disk that uses different encoding from your
+      system.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Connect to a remote computer that uses a different encoding.</p>
+    </item>
   </list>
 
+<!-- Use <steps> for instructions. -->
+
   <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui><gui style="menuitem">Set
   Character Encoding</gui></guiseq> and select the desired character encoding.
   To add more encoding choices to this menu by <gui style="menuitem">Add or
   Remove...</gui>. Browsing from the available encodings, select the encoding
   you want to be added to the menu.</p>
 
+<!-- Add a note to say that most systems should use UTF-8 nowadays. -->
+
 </page>