[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 174/202] help: review pref-profiles.page
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 174/202] help: review pref-profiles.page
- Date: Fri, 1 Mar 2013 23:46:10 +0000 (UTC)
commit 1f4182b9dc47fb9f8d10bcfef734a9869968de14
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date: Tue Feb 26 00:17:17 2013 +0100
help: review pref-profiles.page
help/C/pref-profiles.page | 67 +++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
1 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 30 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/pref-profiles.page b/help/C/pref-profiles.page
index fc3ff1e..481b313 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-profiles.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-profiles.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="pref-profiles">
<info>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-09" status="draft"/>
+ <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="draft"/>
<link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
<credit type="author copyright">
@@ -34,9 +34,13 @@
</item>
<item>
<p><gui style="tab">Keystroke Compatibility</gui></p>
+ <!-- I cannot see a gui tab with that string anywhere, but it also does
+ not help me understand what the compatibility is. Use
+ "<gui>Compatibility</gui> with *something*" -->
</item>
<item>
<p><gui style="tab">Scrolling</gui> and so on.</p>
+ <!-- Either use full stops for all items or none. -->
</item>
</list>
@@ -45,28 +49,27 @@
<p>The default profile is loaded when a new terminal is opened, unless you
have selected another profile, and any changes that you make to the
- settings will be stored in the default profile for the <app>Terminal</app>
- tab or window.</p>
+ settings will be stored in the default profile.</p>
</section>
<section id="set-default" style="task">
<title>Set a default profile</title>
- <p>The default profile is a collection of profile settings applied on launch
- of every <app>Terminal</app> tab or window.</p>
+ <p>The default profile is a collection of profile settings applied on the
+ launch of every <app>Terminal</app> tab or window.</p>
- <steps>
- <item>
- <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
- <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
- <gui style="tab">Profiles</gui></guiseq>.</p>
- </item>
- <item>
- <p>Select the profile to be set as default from <gui>Profile used when
- launching a new terminal</gui>.</p>
- </item>
- </steps>
+ <steps>
+ <item>
+ <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+ <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
+ <gui style="tab">Profiles</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item>
+ <p>Select the profile to be set as default from <gui>Profile used when
+ launching a new terminal</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ </steps>
</section>
@@ -101,20 +104,24 @@
<gui style="tab">General</gui> tab.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Set your preferred terminal behaviour for
- <link xref="pref-custom-exit">command <cmd>exit</cmd></link> and set
+ <p>Set your preferred terminal behaviour for the
+ <link xref="pref-custom-exit"><cmd>exit</cmd> command</link> and set
+ <!-- No <gui> option to do the following. Stick to the gui and talk
+ about custom commands, including login shells instead of login shells
+ themselves. -->
a <link xref="pref-login-shell">custom login shell</link> in the
<gui style="tab">Title and Command</gui> tab.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p><link xref="app-colors">Change the theme and colors</link> in the
- <gui style="tab">Colors</gui> tab.</p>
+ <p><link xref="app-colors">Set your preferred theme and colors</link>
+ in the <gui style="tab">Colors</gui> tab.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p><link xref="pref-scrolling">Set your scrolling preference</link> in
the <gui style="tab">Scrolling</gui> tab.</p>
</item>
</steps>
+
</section>
<section id="create-profile-from-existing" style="task">
@@ -135,7 +142,7 @@
<item>
<p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">File</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">New Profileā¦</gui></guiseq> to clone the profile
- that you have selected.</p>
+ that is currently selected.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Set your <link xref="#edit-profile">desired profile
@@ -150,12 +157,12 @@
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui
- style="menuitem">Preferences</gui><gui
- style="tab">Profiles</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+ <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+ <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
+ <gui style="tab">Profiles</gui></guiseq>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select the desired profile</p>
+ <p>Select your desired profile.</p>
</item>
<item>
<p>Click <gui style="button">Clone</gui>.</p>
@@ -207,8 +214,8 @@
<note style="important">
<p>To make sure you are editing the desired profile, select the profile
- from <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui><gui style="menuitem">Change
- Profile</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+ from <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui>
+ <gui style="menuitem">Change Profile</gui></guiseq>.</p>
</note>
</section>
@@ -216,11 +223,11 @@
<section id="rename-profile" style="task">
<title>Rename an existing profile</title>
- <p>You can rename existing profiles, including the default profile.</p>
+ <p>You can rename existing profiles, including the default profile:</p>
<steps>
<item>
- <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+ <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
<gui style="tab">Profiles</gui></guiseq>.</p>
</item>
@@ -232,7 +239,7 @@
profile preferences dialog for the selected profile.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>In the input box for <gui>Profile name:</gui>, type the new profile
+ <p>In the text box for <gui>Profile name</gui>, type the new profile
name.</p>
</item>
<item>
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