[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 199/225] help: review pref-encoding.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit d9c2739218fa3242643251553fcdf645b9e8b30a
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Feb 25 23:49:17 2013 +0100

    help: review pref-encoding.page

 help/C/pref-encoding.page |   36 +++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-encoding.page b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
index d03dcba..497eacd 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-encoding.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-encoding.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-encoding">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="draft"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <desc>Change to a different character set support</desc>
+    <desc>Change to a different character set support.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
@@ -43,39 +43,41 @@
   <section id="change-default-encoding">
     <title>Change the default character encoding</title>
 
-  <steps>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui><gui
-      style="menuitem">Set Character Encoding</gui></guiseq>.</p>
-    </item>
-    <item>
-      <p>Select the desired character encoding.</p>
-    </item>
-  </steps>
+    <steps>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui>
+       <gui style="menuitem">Set Character Encoding</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      </item>
+      <item>
+        <p>Select the desired character encoding.</p>
+      </item>
+    </steps>
 
   </section>
 
   <section id="add-encoding-menu-choices">
-    <title>Add more choices to the character encoding menu:</title>
+    <title>Add more options to the character encoding menu:</title>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
-        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui><gui
-        style="menuitem">Set Character Encoding</gui><gui style="menuitem">Add
-        or Remove…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+        <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui>
+       <gui style="menuitem">Set Character Encoding</gui>
+       <gui style="menuitem">Add or Remove…</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Browse from the available encodings.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Select the encodings you want to be added to the menu.</p>
+        <p>Select the encodings that you want to be added to the menu.</p>
       </item>
+      <!-- Add more steps with instructions on how to use this menu. -->
     </steps>
-  </section>
 
   <note>
     <p>Most modern operating systems now support and use UTF-8 character
     encoding by default.</p>
   </note>
 
+  </section>
+
 </page>