[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 131/234] help: pref-bell.page complete

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit bd46e98d7dbfb96321ed95d9a52cae87041b8d50
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sun Feb 17 20:07:49 2013 +0000

    help: pref-bell.page complete

 help/C/pref-bell.page |   21 +++++++++++++++------
 1 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/pref-bell.page b/help/C/pref-bell.page
index bde9fce..c4b3011 100644
--- a/help/C/pref-bell.page
+++ b/help/C/pref-bell.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="pref-bell">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-01-10" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-17" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -23,22 +23,31 @@
 
   <title>Set audible bell</title>
 
+  <!-- Reflow. -->
   <p><app>Terminal</app> can sound an audible bell to indicate events in
-  <app>Terminal</app> windows and tabs. These events may be when tab key has been pressed for command 
completion options, a command has finished execution, a warning, error or notification that a command that 
has ended execution.</p>
+  <app>Terminal</app> windows and tabs. For example, the bell will sound when
+  the <key>Tab</key> is pressed to auto-complete a command, when a command has
+  finished executing, or when a command ends execution with a warning, error or
+  notification.</p>
 
   <p>To be notified of these events:</p>
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Go to <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui><gui style="menuitem">Profile
-      Preferences…</gui><gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Profile Preferences…</gui>
+      <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select <gui style="checkbox">Terminal bell</gui></p>
     </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>The setting will be saved automatically, press
+      <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the preference dialog.</p>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>To preview your system's bell sound, press <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>G</key></keyseq>.</p>
+    <p>To preview the bell sound that your system produces, press
+    <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>G</key></keyseq>.</p>
   </note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>