[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 46/143] Help: Modified app-cursor.page.



commit 98ba81a02dd80d97897b4dd3d48a2fbd569c2a1d
Author: Sindhu S <sindhus live in>
Date:   Mon Feb 18 01:37:21 2013 +0530

    Help: Modified app-cursor.page.
    
    Reflowed paragraphs.
    Removed "This is called" as it is implied in the <terms> tag.
    Fixed typos.
    Reworded few lines with more appropriate choice of words.

 help/C/app-cursor.page |   24 +++++++++++-------------
 1 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/app-cursor.page b/help/C/app-cursor.page
index e7950c4..116580d 100644
--- a/help/C/app-cursor.page
+++ b/help/C/app-cursor.page
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
   <title>Change cursor</title>
 
   <p>There are three cursors available in <app>Terminal</app> for you to chose
-  from. To select your preffered cursor type:</p>
+  from. To select your preferred cursor type:</p>
 
   <steps>
     <item>
@@ -33,31 +33,29 @@
       <gui style="tab">General</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Chose your desired cursor shape from the drop down list next to
-      <gui>Cursor shape</gui>, you can chose from the following options:</p>
+      <p>Choose your desired cursor shape from the drop down list next to
+      <gui>Cursor shape</gui>, you can choose from the following options:</p>
       <terms>
         <item>
           <title>|</title>
-          <p><gui>This is called I-Beam</gui></p>
-         <!-- 'This is called' is implied by this being a terms list. It is a
-         bit like definitions in a dictionary starting with 'This word
-         means' ;) -->
+          <p><gui>I-Beam</gui></p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title>⎕</title>
-          <p><gui>This is called Block</gui></p>
+          <p><gui>Block</gui></p>
         </item>
         <item>
           <title>_</title>
-          <p><gui>This is called Underline</gui></p>
+          <p><gui>Underline</gui></p>
         </item>
       </terms>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <!-- Split into two items. -->
-      <p>Upon selection of the cursor, your preference is saved automatically.
-      Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the <gui
-      style="menuitem">Profile Preferences</gui> dialog.</p>
+      <p>Upon selection of the cursor, your choice is saved automatically.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>To return to <app>Terminal</app>, click <gui
+      style="button">Close</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     </steps>
 


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