[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 69/234] help: review app-terminal-sizes.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 00a1147cf9e20f627749ecfea5417f9e5ea0253c
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Thu Feb 14 23:31:33 2013 +0000

    help: review app-terminal-sizes.page

 help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page |   77 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 50 insertions(+), 27 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
index 0840100..5c5ea3a 100644
--- a/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
+++ b/help/C/app-terminal-sizes.page
@@ -9,41 +9,64 @@
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <link type="guide" xref="index#appearence"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="adv-keyboardshortcuts"/>
 
-    <desc>Open <app>Terminal</app> windows of varying sizes</desc>
+    <desc>Change the <app>Terminal</app> window size</desc>
 
   </info>
 
   <title><app>Terminal</app> sizes</title>
 
- <p><app>Terminal</app> windows can be opened in varying sizes suitable to your display. The available 
preset sizes are...</p>
-
- <list type="numbered">
-  <item>
-    <p><gui>80x24</gui></p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p><gui>80x43</gui></p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p><gui>132x24</gui></p>
-  </item>
-  <item>
-    <p><gui>132x43</gui></p>
-  </item>
- </list>
-
-  <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in these sizes, navigate to
-  <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq> and choose from the options
-  given in the menu.</p>
-
-  <note style="tip"><p>If you have enabled <gui>menu access keys</gui>, you can
-  access this menu by pressing
-  <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key><key>1</key></keyseq> to open a
-  <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80x24</gui> and so on.</p></note>
+  <p>You can quickly change the <app>Terminal</app> window size to the
+  following presets:</p>
+
+<!-- Use multiplication signs (×), not the letter X when talking about
+     dimensions. -->
+
+<!-- Give instructions in steps! -->
+
+  <steps>
+    <item>
+      <p>To open a <app>Terminal</app> window in these sizes, navigate to
+      <guiseq><gui style="menu">Terminal</gui></guiseq></p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>choose from the options given in the menu.</p>
+      <list>
+        <item>
+          <p><gui>80×24</gui></p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p><gui>80×43</gui></p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p><gui>132×24</gui></p>
+        </item>
+        <item>
+          <p><gui>132×43</gui></p>
+        </item>
+      </list>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+
+  <note style="tip">
+
+    <!-- "<gui>menu access keys</gui>" should be a link to the page that says
+    how to do this! -->
+
+    <p>If you have enabled <gui>menu access keys</gui>, you can access this
+    menu by pressing <keyseq><key>Alt</key><key>T</key><key>1</key></keyseq> to
+    open a <app>Terminal</app> window of size <gui>80x24</gui> and so on.</p>
+  </note>
+
+<!-- Rewrite the following as proper <steps>: -->
 
   <terms>
     <item>
@@ -58,4 +81,4 @@
     </item>
   </terms>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>