[gnome-terminal/wip/mallard-merge: 271/278] Help: review txt-links

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 9c92339d4928468a12daef56a9d544c4dcec4f28
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Sun Mar 3 06:53:18 2013 -0500

    Help: review txt-links

 help/C/txt-links.page |   19 ++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/txt-links.page b/help/C/txt-links.page
index 18e4516..468cc85 100644
--- a/help/C/txt-links.page
+++ b/help/C/txt-links.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#textoutput"/>
     <link type="task" xref="txt-hyperlinks" />
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-03" status="review"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-03" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -17,6 +17,11 @@
       <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Open links to web and email addresses.</desc>
   </info>
@@ -25,8 +30,8 @@
 
   <p><app>Terminal</app> parses the terminal output and automatically detects
   snippets of text that are web addresses or email addresses. Web and email
-  addresses are automatically highlighted when you point your cursor on the
-  text indicating that the link can be opened in an application.</p>
+  addresses are automatically highlighted when you point your cursor to the
+  text, indicating that the link can be opened in an application.</p>
 
   <p>For example, you may see <input>http://www.gnome.org</input> or
   <input>username example com</input> generated as a part of terminal output by
@@ -35,8 +40,8 @@
   <section id="hyperlinks">
     <title>Open or copy web addresses</title>
 
-    <p>Web addresses also called hyperlinks. They can be copied to the system
-    clipboard or opened in your preferred web browser.</p>
+    <p>Web addresses are also called hyperlinks. They can be copied to the
+    system clipboard or opened in your preferred web browser.</p>
 
     <list>
       <item>
@@ -66,9 +71,9 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="email">
-    <title>Email or copy an email addresses</title>
+    <title>Email or copy email addresses</title>
 
-    <p>Email addresses can be copied to system clipboard or opened in your
+    <p>Email addresses can be copied to the system clipboard or opened in your
     preferred email client.</p>
 
     <list>