[gnome-dictionary/mallard-help: 52/58] Review find help page

[Sindhu S <sindhus src gnome org>]

commit 51d4315b35832065c12743fb970cbf3c4cad76af
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Fri Mar 29 09:39:09 2013 +0000

    Review find help page

 help/C/find.page |   36 ++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/find.page b/help/C/find.page
index 6b41edd..ab80dce 100644
--- a/help/C/find.page
+++ b/help/C/find.page
@@ -3,45 +3,49 @@
       id="find">
 
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.6" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="candidate"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#features"/>
-    <!--link type="guide" xref=""/-->
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
       <email>sindhus live in</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="copyright editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email>kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
-    <desc>Search for text in definitions.</desc>
+    <desc>Find text in a definition.</desc>
 
   </info>
 
-  <title>Find text</title>
+  <title>Search within a definition</title>
 
-  <p><app>Dictionary</app> is able to search specific text in definitions.</p>
+  <p>Some dictionary entires can be very long and can contain many results, so
+  you may wish to search them to find the section that is relevant to you.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <title>To find text in definitions:</title>
+    <title>To find definitions:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Edit</gui>
       <gui style="menitem">Find</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>The <gui>Find</gui> bar will appear at the bottom of the
-      <app>Dictionary</app> window. Type in the desired term to find within
-      the the currently displayed definition. If the term is found, it is
-      highlighted.</p>
+      <app>Dictionary</app> window. Type in your search term to search within
+      the definition that is currently displayed.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click <gui style="button">Previous</gui> or
+      <gui style="button">Next</gui> to scroll through the results. The search
+      will not wrap around: in other words, it will not go to the top of the
+      page when you are on the last result and click
+      <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
-  <note style="tip">
-    <p>If multiple terms are found in the definition that match your search
-    term, then to navigate these results use you may use:
-    <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>G</key></keyseq> to find the next occurence of
-    the term and <keyseq><key>Shift</key><key>Ctrl</key><key>G</key></keyseq>
-    to find previous occurence of the term.</p>
-  </note>
 </page>