[gnome-user-docs] shell-apps-favorites.page has been proofread

[Jana Svarova <jsvarova src gnome org>]

commit 6a0277d6cfaf922d594c80dda7c3ff7b16958e0f
Author: Jana Svarova <jsvarova redhat com>
Date:   Tue May 7 17:02:57 2013 +0200

    shell-apps-favorites.page has been proofread
    
    Second step split into two, minor corrections provided

 gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page |   24 ++++++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
index 0a2e3b7..50c3047 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/shell-apps-favorites.page
@@ -20,6 +20,11 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Jana Svarova</name>
+      <email>jana svarova gmail com</email>
+      <years>2013</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
@@ -30,18 +35,21 @@
   easy access:</p>
  <steps>
   <item><p if:test="!platform:gnome-classic">Open the
-  <link xref="shell-terminology">Activities overview</link>.</p>
-  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Press the
-  <key xref="keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key to open the
-  <link xref="shell-terminology">Activities overview</link>.</p></item>
+  <link xref="shell-terminology">Activities overview</link> by clicking
+  <gui>Activities</gui> at the top left of the screen</p>
+  <p if:test="platform:gnome-classic">Click on the
+  <link xref="shell-terminology">Applications menu</link> at the top 
+  left of the screen and choose the <gui>Activities overview</gui> item from the 
+  menu.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click on the grid button in the dash and find the application you
-  want to add. Right-click on the application icon and select <gui>Add to
+  want to add.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Right-click on the application icon and select <gui>Add to
   Favorites</gui>.</p>
-  <p>Alternately, you can click-and-drag the icon into the dash.</p>
-  </item>
+  <p>Alternately, you can click-and-drag the icon into the dash.</p></item>
+  
   </steps>
 
-  <p>To remove an application icon from the dash, right click on the application
+  <p>To remove an application icon from the dash, right-click on the application
   icon and select <gui>Remove from Favorites</gui>.</p>
 
   <note style="tip" if:test="platform:gnome-classic"><p>Favorite applications also