[gnome-user-docs] Updated assorted net-wireless pages for 3.10



commit dc096bed2980dcba0e5f187142fe420704488f5d
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Nov 11 07:44:34 2013 -0500

    Updated assorted net-wireless pages for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page               |   25 +++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page            |   24 +++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page             |   56 ++++++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page       |   50 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page                |   35 +++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page              |   46 +++++++--
 ...et-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page |   54 ++++++++--
 ...et-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page |  106 +++++++++++++++-----
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page |   40 ++++++--
 ...net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page |   49 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page     |   26 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page              |   20 +++-
 12 files changed, 407 insertions(+), 124 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
index 85b4b88..a9c830c 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
@@ -1,18 +1,24 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-adhoc">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
-      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
-      <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">shaunm gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Use an ad-hoc network to allow other devices to connect to your
@@ -39,17 +45,18 @@ link below where it says the name of the network is your device name.</p>
 </comment>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select <gui>Wireless</gui> on the left.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Click the <gui>Use as Hotspot</gui> button.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
+  <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click the <gui>Use as Hotspot...</gui> button.</p></item>
   <item><p>If you are already connected to a wireless network, you will be asked
-  if you want to disconnect from that network. A single wireless adapter can only
-  connect to or create one network at a time. Click <gui>Create Hotspot</gui> to
-  confirm.</p></item>
+  if you want to disconnect from that network. A single wireless adapter can
+  connect to or create only one network at a time. Click
+  <gui>Turn On</gui> to confirm.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>A network name (SSID) and security key are automatically generated.
 The network name will be based on the name of your computer. Other devices
 will need this information to connect to the hotspot you've just created.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
index fb1709d..418e355 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-airplane.page
@@ -1,14 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-airplane">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-20" status="final"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Open Network Settings and switch Airplane Mode to ON.</desc>
@@ -17,17 +20,24 @@
 
 <title>Turn off wireless (airplane mode)</title>
 
-<p>If you have your computer on an airplane (or some other area where wireless connections are not allowed), 
you should switch off your wireless. You may also want to switch off your wireless for other reasons (to save 
battery power, for example). To do this:</p>
+<p>If you have your computer on an airplane (or some other area where wireless
+ connections are not allowed), you should switch off your wireless. You may
+ also want to switch off your wireless for other reasons (to save battery power,
+ for example). To do this:</p>
 
 <steps>
- <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+ <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
+  <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p>
+ </item>
+ <item><p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> on. This will turn off your wireless connection until you switch off 
airplane mode again.</p>
+  <p>Switch <gui>Airplane Mode</gui> to <gui>ON</gui>. This will turn off your
+ wireless connection until you switch airplane mode off again.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-<note><p>Using <em>Airplane Mode</em> will completely turn off both wireless and Bluetooth 
connections.</p></note>
+<note><p>Using <em>Airplane Mode</em> will completely turn off both wireless
+ and Bluetooth connections.</p></note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
index b6f0963..72b9496 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-connect.page
@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-connect">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting"/>
@@ -8,10 +10,15 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-disconnecting"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Get on the internet - wirelessly.</desc>
@@ -20,23 +27,48 @@
 
 <title>Connect to a wireless network</title>
 
-<p>If you have a wireless-enabled computer, you can connect to a wireless network that is within range to 
get access to the internet, view shared files on the network, and so on.</p>
+<p>If you have a wireless-enabled computer, you can connect to a wireless
+ network that is within range to get access to the internet, view shared files
+ on the network, and so on.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item>
-   <p>Click on the network icon on the top bar and click the name of the network you want to connect to.</p>
-   <p>If the name of the network isn't in the list, try clicking <gui>More</gui> to see if the network is 
further down the list. If you still don't see the network, you may be out of range or the network <link 
xref="net-wireless-hidden">might be hidden</link>.</p>
+  <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar, select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>,
+ then click <gui>Select Network</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click the name of the network you want to connect to, then click
+ <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+   <p>If the name of the network isn't in the list, try clicking <gui>More</gui>
+ to see if the network is further down the list. If you still don't see the
+ network, you may be out of range or the network
+ <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">might be hidden</link>.</p>
   </item>
-  <item><p>If the network is protected by a password (<link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">encryption 
key</link>), enter the password when prompted and click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
-  <p>If you do not know the key, it may be written on the underside of the wireless router or base station, 
in its instruction manual, or you may have to ask the person who administers the wireless network.</p></item>
-  <item><p>The network icon will change appearance as the computer attempts to connect to the 
network.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If the network is protected by a password
+ (<link xref="net-wireless-wepwpa">encryption key</link>), enter the password
+ when prompted and click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+  <p>If you do not know the key, it may be written on the underside of the
+ wireless router or base station, in its instruction manual, or you may have to
+ ask the person who administers the wireless network.</p></item>
+  <item><p>The network icon will change appearance as the computer attempts to
+ connect to the network.</p></item>
   <item>
-   <p>If the connection is successful, the icon will change to a dot with several bars above it. More bars 
indicate a stronger connection to the network. If there aren't many bars, the connection is weak and might 
not be very reliable.</p>
+   <p>If the connection is successful, the icon will change to a dot with
+ several bars above it. More bars indicate a stronger connection to the
+ network. If there aren't many bars, the connection is weak and might not be
+ very reliable.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>If the connection is not successful, you <link xref="net-passwordok-noconnect">may be asked for your 
password again</link> or it might just tell you that the connection has been disconnected. There are a number 
of things that could have caused this to happen. You could have entered the wrong password, the wireless 
signal could be too weak, or your computer's wireless card might have a problem, for example. See <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting" /> for more help.</p>
+<p>If the connection is not successful, you
+ <link xref="net-passwordok-noconnect">may be asked for your password again</link>
+ or it might just tell you that the connection has been disconnected. There are
+ a number of things that could have caused this to happen. You could have
+ entered the wrong password, the wireless signal could be too weak, or your
+ computer's wireless card might have a problem, for example. See
+ <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting" /> for more help.</p>
 
-<p>A stronger connection to a wireless network does not necessarily mean that you have a faster internet 
connection, or that you will have faster download speeds. The wireless connection connects your computer to 
the <em>device which provides the internet connection</em> (like a router or modem), but the two connections 
are actually different, and so will run at different speeds.</p>
+<p>A stronger connection to a wireless network does not necessarily mean that
+ you have a faster internet connection, or that you will have faster download
+ speeds. The wireless connection connects your computer to the <em>device which
+ provides the internet connection</em> (like a router or modem), but the two
+ connections are actually different, and so will run at different speeds.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
index 4ffaf63..dc394b7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-disconnecting.page
@@ -1,60 +1,88 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="problem"
       id="net-wireless-disconnecting">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
-      <email>jwcampbell gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
-      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>You might have low signal, or the network might not be letting you connect properly.</desc>
+    <desc>You might have low signal, or the network might not be letting you
+    connect properly.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Why does my wireless network keep disconnecting?</title>
 
-<p>You may find that you have been disconnected from a wireless network even though you wanted to stay 
connected. Your computer will normally try to reconnect to the network as soon as this happens (the network 
icon on the top bar will spin or pulse if it is trying to reconnect), but it can be annoying, especially if 
you were using the internet at the time.</p>
+<p>You may find that you have been disconnected from a wireless network even
+ though you wanted to stay connected. Your computer will normally try to
+ reconnect to the network as soon as this happens (the network icon on the top
+ bar will display three dots if it is trying to reconnect), but it can be
+ annoying, especially if you were using the internet at the time.</p>
 
 <section id="signal">
  <title>Weak wireless signal</title>
 
- <p>A common reason for being disconnected from a wireless network is that you have low signal. Wireless 
networks have a limited range, so if you are too far away from the wireless base station you may not be able 
to get a strong enough signal to maintain a connection. Walls and other objects between you and the base 
station can also weaken the signal.</p>
+ <p>A common reason for being disconnected from a wireless network is that you
+ have low signal. Wireless networks have a limited range, so if you are too far
+ away from the wireless base station you may not be able to get a strong enough
+ signal to maintain a connection. Walls and other objects between you and the
+ base station can also weaken the signal.</p>
 
- <p>The network icon on the top bar displays how strong your wireless signal is. If the signal looks low, 
try moving closer to the wireless base station.</p>
+ <p>The network icon on the top bar displays how strong your wireless signal is.
+ If the signal looks low, try moving closer to the wireless base station.</p>
 
 </section>
 
 <section id="network">
  <title>Network connection not being established properly</title>
 
- <p>Sometimes, when you connect to a wireless network, it may appear that you have successfully connected at 
first, but then you will be disconnected soon after. This normally happens because your computer was only 
partially successful in connecting to the network - it managed to establish a connection, but was unable to 
finalize the connection for some reason and so was disconnected.</p>
+ <p>Sometimes, when you connect to a wireless network, it may appear that you
+ have successfully connected at first, but then you will be disconnected soon
+ after. This normally happens because your computer was only partially
+ successful in connecting to the network - it managed to establish a connection,
+ but was unable to finalize the connection for some reason and so was
+ disconnected.</p>
 
- <p>A possible reason for this is that you entered the wrong wireless passphrase, or that your computer was 
not allowed on the network (because the network requires a username to log in, for example).</p>
+ <p>A possible reason for this is that you entered the wrong wireless
+ passphrase, or that your computer was not allowed on the network (because the
+ network requires a username to log in, for example).</p>
 
 </section>
 
 <section id="hardware">
  <title>Unreliable wireless hardware/drivers</title>
 
- <p>Some wireless network hardware can be a little unreliable. Wireless networks are complicated, so 
wireless cards and base stations occasionally run into minor problems and may drop connections. This is 
annoying, but it happens quite regularly with many devices. If you are disconnected from wireless connections 
from time to time, this may be the only reason. If it happens very regularly, you may want to consider 
getting some different hardware.</p>
+ <p>Some wireless network hardware can be a little unreliable. Wireless
+ networks are complicated, so wireless cards and base stations occasionally run
+ into minor problems and may drop connections. This is annoying, but it happens
+ quite regularly with many devices. If you are disconnected from wireless
+ connections from time to time, this may be the only reason. If it happens very
+ regularly, you may want to consider getting some different hardware.</p>
 
 </section>
 
 <section id="busy">
  <title>Busy wireless networks</title>
 
- <p>Wireless networks in busy places (in universities and coffee shops, for example) often have many 
computers trying to connect to them at once. Sometimes these networks get too busy and may not be able to 
handle all of the computers that are trying to connect, so some of them get disconnected.</p>
+ <p>Wireless networks in busy places (in universities and coffee shops, for
+ example) often have many computers trying to connect to them at once. Sometimes
+ these networks get too busy and may not be able to handle all of the computers
+ that are trying to connect, so some of them get disconnected.</p>
 
 </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index 9cf7f9c..3558614 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -1,46 +1,63 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="problem"
       id="net-wireless-find">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-problem"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-hidden"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, there might be too many wireless networks nearby, or 
you might be out of range.</desc>
+    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, there might be too many
+    wireless networks nearby, or you might be out of range.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>I can't see my wireless network in the list</title>
 
-<p>There are a number of reasons why you might not be able to see your wireless network on the list of 
networks which appears when you click the network icon on the top bar.</p>
+<p>There are a number of reasons why you might not be able to see your wireless
+ network on the list of networks which appears when you click the network icon
+ on the top bar.</p>
 
 <list>
  <item>
-  <p>If no networks are shown in the list, your wireless hardware could be turned off, or it <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting">may not be working properly</link>. Make sure it is turned on.</p>
+  <p>If no networks are shown in the list, your wireless hardware could be
+  turned off, or it <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting">may not be
+  working properly</link>. Make sure it is turned on.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>If there are lots of wireless networks nearby, the network you are looking for might not be on the 
first page of the list. If this is the case, look at the bottom of the list for an arrow pointing towards the 
right and hover your mouse over it to display the rest of the wireless networks.</p>
+  <p>If there are lots of wireless networks nearby, the network you are looking
+  for might not be on the first page of the list. If this is the case, look at
+  the bottom of the list for an arrow pointing towards the right and hover your
+  mouse over it to display the rest of the wireless networks.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>You could be out of range of the network. Try moving closer to the wireless base station/router and see 
if the network appears in the list after a while.</p>
+  <p>You could be out of range of the network. Try moving closer to the
+  wireless base station/router and see if the network appears in the list after
+  a while.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>The list of wireless networks takes time to update. If you have just turned on your computer or moved 
to a different location, wait for a minute or so and then check if the network has appeared in the list.</p>
+  <p>The list of wireless networks takes time to update. If you have just
+  turned on your computer or moved to a different location, wait for a minute
+  or so and then check if the network has appeared in the list.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
-  <p>The network could be hidden. You need to <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">connect in a different 
way</link> if it is a hidden network.</p>
+  <p>The network could be hidden. You need to
+  <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">connect in a different way</link> if it is a
+  hidden network.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
index 99b5ad9..63c2a4b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-hidden.page
@@ -1,46 +1,70 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-hidden">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-editcon#wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-11" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+    </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Open <gui>Network Settings</gui> and connect to an <gui>Other</gui> wireless network.</desc>
+    <desc>Connect to a wireless network that is not displayed in the network
+    list.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Connect to a hidden wireless network</title>
 
-<p>It is possible to set up a wireless network so that it is "hidden." Hidden networks won't show up in the 
list of networks that are displayed when you click the network icon on the top bar (or the list of wireless 
networks on any other computer). To connect to a hidden wireless network:</p>
+<p>It is possible to set up a wireless network so that it is "hidden." Hidden
+ networks won't show up in the list of wireless networks displayed in the
+ <gui>Network</gui> settings. To connect to a hidden wireless network:</p>
 
 <steps>
+  <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
+  <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click the <gui>Connect to Hidden Network...</gui> button.</p></item>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon on the top bar and select <gui>Network Settings</gui>.</p>
+  <p>In the window that appears, select a previously-connected hidden network
+  using the <gui>Connection</gui> drop-down list, or <gui>New</gui> for a new
+  one.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Select <gui>Wireless</gui> from the list on the left.</p>
+  <p>For a new connection, type the network name and choose the type of
+  wireless security from the <gui>Wi-Fi security</gui> drop-down list.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Select <gui>Other</gui> from the <gui>Network Name</gui> drop-down list.</p>
+  <p>Enter the password or other security details.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>In the window that appears, type the network name, choose the type of wireless security, and click 
<gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Connect</gui>.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>You may have to check the settings of the wireless base station or router to see what the network name 
is. It is sometimes called the <em>BSSID</em> (Basic Service Set Identifier), and looks something like this: 
<gui>02:00:01:02:03:04</gui>.</p>
+<p>You may have to check the settings of the wireless base station or router to
+ see what the network name is. It is sometimes called the <em>BSSID</em> (Basic
+ Service Set Identifier), and looks something like this:
+ <gui>02:00:01:02:03:04</gui>.</p>
 
-<p>You should also check the wireless base station's security settings. Look for terms like WEP and WPA.</p>
+<p>You should also check the wireless base station's security settings. Look
+ for terms like WEP and WPA.</p>
 
 <note>
- <p>You may think that hiding your wireless network will improve security by preventing people who don't 
know about it from connecting. In practice, this is not the case; the network is slightly harder to find but 
it is still detectable.</p>
+ <p>You may think that hiding your wireless network will improve security by
+ preventing people who don't know about it from connecting. In practice, this
+ is not the case; the network is slightly harder to find but it is still
+ detectable.</p>
 </note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
index dc3d55d..243b8c6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers.page
@@ -1,9 +1,12 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -11,10 +14,11 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
-      <email>philbull gmail com</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Some device drivers don't work very well with certain wireless adapters, so you may need to find a 
better one.</desc>
+    <desc>Some device drivers don't work very well with certain wireless
+    adapters, so you may need to find a better one.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
@@ -23,26 +27,58 @@
 
 <!-- Needs links (see below) -->
 
-<p>In this step you can check to see if you can get working device drivers for your wireless adapter. A 
<em>device driver</em> is a piece of software which tells the computer how to make a hardware device work 
properly. Even though the wireless adapter has been recognized by the computer, it may not have drivers which 
work very well. You may be able to find different drivers for the wireless adapter which do work. Try some of 
the options below:</p>
+<p>In this step you can check to see if you can get working device drivers for
+ your wireless adapter. A <em>device driver</em> is a piece of software which
+ tells the computer how to make a hardware device work properly. Even though
+ the wireless adapter has been recognized by the computer, it may not have
+ drivers which work very well. You may be able to find different drivers for
+ the wireless adapter which do work. Try some of the options below:</p>
 
 <list>
  <item>
   <p>Check to see if your wireless adapter is on a list of supported devices</p>
-  <p>Most Linux distributions keep a list of wireless devices that they have support for. Sometimes, these 
lists provide extra information on how to get the drivers for certain adapters working properly. Go to the 
list for your distribution (for example, <link 
href="https://help.ubuntu.com/community/WifiDocs/WirelessCardsSupported";>Ubuntu</link>, <link 
href="http://linuxwireless.org/en/users/Drivers";>Fedora</link> or <link 
href="http://en.opensuse.org/HCL:Network_(Wireless)">openSuSE</link>) and see if your make and model of 
wireless adapter is listed. You may be able to use some of the information there to get your wireless drivers 
working.</p>
+  <p>Most Linux distributions keep a list of wireless devices that they have
+ support for. Sometimes, these lists provide extra information on how to get
+ the drivers for certain adapters working properly. Go to the list for your
+ distribution (for example,
+ <link href="https://help.ubuntu.com/community/WifiDocs/WirelessCardsSupported";>Ubuntu</link>,
+ <link href="http://linuxwireless.org/en/users/Drivers";>Fedora</link> or
+ <link href="http://en.opensuse.org/HCL:Network_(Wireless)">openSuSE</link>)
+ and see if your make and model of wireless adapter is listed. You may be able
+ to use some of the information there to get your wireless drivers working.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
   <p>Look for restricted (binary) drivers</p>
-  <p>Many Linux distributions only come with device drivers which are <em>free</em> and <em>open 
source</em>. This is because they cannot distribute drivers which are proprietary, or closed-source. If the 
correct driver for your wireless adapter is only available in a non-free, or "binary-only" version, it may 
not be installed by default. If this is the case, look on the wireless adapter manufacturer's website to see 
if they have any Linux drivers.</p>
-  <p>Some Linux distributions have a tool that can download restricted drivers for you. If your distribution 
has one of these, use it to see if it can find any wireless drivers for you.</p>
+  <p>Many Linux distributions only come with device drivers which are
+ <em>free</em> and <em>open source</em>. This is because they cannot distribute
+ drivers which are proprietary, or closed-source. If the correct driver for
+ your wireless adapter is only available in a non-free, or "binary-only"
+ version, it may not be installed by default. If this is the case, look on the
+ wireless adapter manufacturer's website to see if they have any Linux drivers.</p>
+  <p>Some Linux distributions have a tool that can download restricted drivers
+ for you. If your distribution has one of these, use it to see if it can find
+ any wireless drivers for you.</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
   <p>Use the Windows drivers for your adapter</p>
-  <p>In general, you cannot use a device driver designed for one operating system (like Windows) on another 
operating system (like Linux). This is because they have different ways of handling devices. For wireless 
adapters, however, you can install a compatibility layer called <em>NDISwrapper</em> which lets you use some 
Windows wireless drivers on Linux. This is useful because wireless adapters almost always have Windows 
drivers available for them, whereas Linux drivers are sometimes not available. You can learn more about how 
to use NDISwrapper <link 
href="http://sourceforge.net/apps/mediawiki/ndiswrapper/index.php?title=Main_Page";>here</link>. Note that not 
all wireless drivers can be used through NDISwrapper.</p>
+  <p>In general, you cannot use a device driver designed for one operating
+ system (like Windows) on another operating system (like Linux). This is
+ because they have different ways of handling devices. For wireless adapters,
+ however, you can install a compatibility layer called <em>NDISwrapper</em>
+ which lets you use some Windows wireless drivers on Linux. This is useful
+ because wireless adapters almost always have Windows drivers available for
+ them, whereas Linux drivers are sometimes not available. You can learn more
+ about how to use NDISwrapper
+ <link href="http://sourceforge.net/apps/mediawiki/ndiswrapper/index.php?title=Main_Page";>here</link>.
+ Note that not all wireless drivers can be used through NDISwrapper.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
-<p>If none of these options work, you may want to try a different wireless adapter to see if you can get 
that working. USB wireless adapters are often quite cheap, and will plug into any computer. You should check 
that the adapter is compatible with your Linux distribution before buying it, though.</p>
+<p>If none of these options work, you may want to try a different wireless
+ adapter to see if you can get that working. USB wireless adapters are often
+ quite cheap, and will plug into any computer. You should check that the
+ adapter is compatible with your Linux distribution before buying it, though.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
index fd872de..ec90acd 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check.page
@@ -1,10 +1,13 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check">
   <info>
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -12,81 +15,136 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Even though your wireless adapter is connected, it may not have been recognized properly by the 
computer.</desc>
+    <desc>Even though your wireless adapter is connected, it may not have been
+    recognized properly by the computer.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Wireless connection troubleshooter</title>
 <subtitle>Check that the wireless adapter was recognized</subtitle>
 
-<p>Even though the wireless adapter is connected to the computer, it may not have been recognized as a 
network device by the computer. In this step, you will check whether the device was recognized properly.</p>
+<p>Even though the wireless adapter is connected to the computer, it may not
+ have been recognized as a network device by the computer. In this step, you
+ will check whether the device was recognized properly.</p>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Open a Terminal window, type <cmd>lshw -C network</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>. If this gives an 
error message, you may need to install the <app>lshw</app> program on your computer.</p>
+  <p>Open a Terminal window, type <cmd>lshw -C network</cmd> and press
+ <key>Enter</key>. If this gives an error message, you may need to install the
+ <app>lshw</app> program on your computer.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Look through the information that appeared and find the <em>Wireless interface</em> section. If your 
wireless adapter was detected properly, you should see something similar (but not identical) to this:</p>
+  <p>Look through the information that appeared and find the
+ <em>Wireless interface</em> section. If your wireless adapter was detected
+ properly, you should see something similar (but not identical) to this:</p>
    <code><![CDATA[*-network
        description: Wireless interface
        product: PRO/Wireless 3945ABG [Golan] Network Connection
        vendor: Intel Corporation]]></code>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>If a wireless device is listed, continue on to the <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>.</p>
-  <p>If a wireless device is <em>not</em> listed, the next steps you take will depend on the type of device 
that you use. Refer to the section below that is relevant to the type of wireless adapter that your computer 
has (<link xref="#pci">internal PCI</link>, <link xref="#usb">USB</link>, or <link 
xref="#pcmcia">PCMCIA</link>).</p>
+  <p>If a wireless device is listed, continue on to the
+ <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>.</p>
+  <p>If a wireless device is <em>not</em> listed, the next steps you take will
+ depend on the type of device that you use. Refer to the section below that is
+ relevant to the type of wireless adapter that your computer has
+ (<link xref="#pci">internal PCI</link>, <link xref="#usb">USB</link>, or
+ <link xref="#pcmcia">PCMCIA</link>).</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
 <section id="pci">
  <title>PCI (internal) wireless adapter</title>
- <p>Internal PCI adapters are the most common, and are found in most laptops made within the past few years. 
To check if your PCI wireless adapter was recognized:</p>
+ <p>Internal PCI adapters are the most common, and are found in most laptops
+ made within the past few years. To check if your PCI wireless adapter was
+ recognized:</p>
  <steps>
-  <item><p>Open a Terminal, type <cmd>lspci</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Open a Terminal, type <cmd>lspci</cmd> and press
+  <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
   <item>
-   <p>Look through the list of devices that is shown and find any that are marked <code>Network 
controller</code> or <code>Ethernet controller</code>. Several devices may be marked in this way; the one 
corresponding to your wireless adapter might include words like <code>wireless</code>, <code>WLAN</code>, 
<code>wifi</code> or <code>802.11</code>. Here is an example of what the entry might look like:</p>
+   <p>Look through the list of devices that is shown and find any that are
+ marked <code>Network controller</code> or <code>Ethernet controller</code>.
+ Several devices may be marked in this way; the one corresponding to your
+ wireless adapter might include words like <code>wireless</code>,
+ <code>WLAN</code>, <code>wifi</code> or <code>802.11</code>. Here is an
+ example of what the entry might look like:</p>
  <code>Network controller: Intel Corporation PRO/Wireless 3945ABG [Golan] Network Connection</code>
  </item>
- <item><p>If you found your wireless adapter in the list, proceed to the <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>. If you didn't find anything 
related to your wireless adapter, see <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>If you found your wireless adapter in the list, proceed to the
+ <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>.
+ If you didn't find anything related to your wireless adapter, see
+ <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
  </steps>
 </section>
 
 <section id="usb">
  <title>USB wireless adapter</title>
- <p>Wireless adapters that plug into a USB port on your computer are less common. They can plug directly 
into a USB port, or may be connected by a USB cable. 3G/mobile broadband adapters look quite similar to 
wireless (wifi) adapters, so if you think you have a USB wireless adapter, double-check that it is not 
actually a 3G adapter. To check if your USB wireless adapter was recognized:</p>
+ <p>Wireless adapters that plug into a USB port on your computer are less
+ common. They can plug directly into a USB port, or may be connected by a USB
+ cable. 3G/mobile broadband adapters look quite similar to wireless (wifi)
+ adapters, so if you think you have a USB wireless adapter, double-check that
+ it is not actually a 3G adapter. To check if your USB wireless adapter was
+ recognized:</p>
  <steps>
-  <item><p>Open a Terminal, type <cmd>lsusb</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>.</p></item>
   <item>
-   <p>Look through the list of devices that is shown and find any that seem to refer to a wireless or 
network device. The one corresponding to your wireless adapter might include words like 
<code>wireless</code>, <code>WLAN</code>, <code>wifi</code> or <code>802.11</code>. Here is an example of 
what the entry might look like:</p>
+    <p>Open a Terminal, type <cmd>lsusb</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+   <p>Look through the list of devices that is shown and find any that seem to
+ refer to a wireless or network device. The one corresponding to your wireless
+ adapter might include words like <code>wireless</code>, <code>WLAN</code>,
+ <code>wifi</code> or <code>802.11</code>. Here is an example of what the entry
+ might look like:</p>
    <code><![CDATA[Bus 005 Device 009: ID 12d1:140b Huawei Technologies Co., Ltd. EC1260 Wireless Data Modem 
HSD USB Card]]></code>
   </item>
-  <item><p>If you found your wireless adapter in the list, proceed to the <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>. If you didn't find anything 
related to your wireless adapter, see <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If you found your wireless adapter in the list, proceed to the
+ <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>.
+ If you didn't find anything related to your wireless adapter, see
+ <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
  </steps>
 </section>
 
 <section id="pcmcia">
  <title>Checking for a PCMCIA device</title>
- <p>PCMCIA wireless adapters are typically rectangular cards which slot into the side of your laptop. They 
are more commonly found in older computers. To check if your PCMCIA adapter was recognized:</p>
+ <p>PCMCIA wireless adapters are typically rectangular cards which slot into
+ the side of your laptop. They are more commonly found in older computers. To
+ check if your PCMCIA adapter was recognized:</p>
  <steps>
-  <item><p>Start your computer <em>without</em> the wireless adapter plugged in.</p></item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Start your computer <em>without</em> the wireless adapter plugged in.</p>
+  </item>
   <item>
    <p>Open a Terminal and type the following, then press <key>Enter</key>:</p>
    <code>tail -f /var/log/messages</code>
-   <p>This will display a list of messages related to your computer's hardware, and will automatically 
update if anything to do with your hardware changes.</p>
+   <p>This will display a list of messages related to your computer's hardware,
+ and will automatically update if anything to do with your hardware changes.</p>
   </item>
-  <item><p>Insert your wireless adapter into the PCMCIA slot and see what changes in the Terminal window. 
The changes should include some information about your wireless adapter. Look through them and see if you can 
identify it.</p></item>
-  <item><p>To stop the command from running in the Terminal, press 
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>C</key></keyseq>. After you have done that, you can close the Terminal if you 
like.</p></item>
-  <item><p>If you found any information about your wireless adapter, proceed to the <link 
xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>. If you didn't find anything 
related to your wireless adapter, see <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Insert your wireless adapter into the PCMCIA slot and see what
+ changes in the Terminal window. The changes should include some information
+ about your wireless adapter. Look through them and see if you can identify
+ it.</p></item>
+  <item><p>To stop the command from running in the Terminal, press
+ <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>C</key></keyseq>. After you have done that, you
+ can close the Terminal if you like.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If you found any information about your wireless adapter, proceed to the
+ <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-device-drivers">Device Drivers step</link>.
+ If you didn't find anything related to your wireless adapter, see
+ <link xref="#not-recognized">the instructions below</link>.</p></item>
  </steps>
 </section>
 
 <section id="not-recognized">
  <title>Wireless adapter was not recognized</title>
-<p>If your wireless adapter was not recognized, it might not be working properly or the correct drivers may 
not be installed for it. How you check to see if there are any drivers you can install will depend on which 
Linux distribution you are using (like Ubuntu, Fedora or openSuSE).</p>
-<p>To get specific help, look at the support options on your distribution's website. These might include 
mailing lists and web chats where you can ask about your wireless adapter, for example.</p>
+<p>If your wireless adapter was not recognized, it might not be working
+ properly or the correct drivers may not be installed for it. How you check to
+ see if there are any drivers you can install will depend on which Linux
+ distribution you are using (like Ubuntu, Fedora or openSuSE).</p>
+<p>To get specific help, look at the support options on your distribution's
+ website. These might include mailing lists and web chats where you can ask
+ about your wireless adapter, for example.</p>
 </section>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
index 298ef21..6d0b665 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info.page
@@ -1,10 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info">
+
   <info>
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-check"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -12,38 +16,54 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>You may need details such as the model number of your wireless adapter in subsequent 
troubleshooting steps.</desc>
+    <desc>You may need details such as the model number of your wireless
+    adapter in subsequent troubleshooting steps.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Wireless network troubleshooter</title>
 <subtitle>Gather information about your network hardware</subtitle>
 
-<p>In this step, you will collect information about your wireless network device. The way you fix many 
wireless problems depends on the make and model number of the wireless adapter, so you will need to make a 
note of these details. It can also be helpful to have some of the items that came with your computer too, 
like device driver installation discs. Look for the following items, if you still have them:</p>
+<p>In this step, you will collect information about your wireless network
+ device. The way you fix many wireless problems depends on the make and model
+ number of the wireless adapter, so you will need to make a note of these
+ details. It can also be helpful to have some of the items that came with your
+ computer too, like device driver installation discs. Look for the following
+ items, if you still have them:</p>
 
 <list>
  <item>
-  <p>The packaging and instructions for your wireless devices (especially the user guide for your router)</p>
+  <p>The packaging and instructions for your wireless devices (especially the
+ user guide for your router)</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>The disc containing drivers for your wireless adapter (even if it only contains Windows drivers)</p>
+  <p>The disc containing drivers for your wireless adapter (even if it only
+ contains Windows drivers)</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>The manufacturers and model numbers of your computer, wireless adapter and router. This information can 
usually be found on the underside/reverse of the device.</p>
+  <p>The manufacturers and model numbers of your computer, wireless adapter and
+ router. This information can usually be found on the underside/reverse of the
+device.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Any version/revision numbers that may be printed on your wireless network devices or their packaging. 
These can be especially helpful, so look carefully.</p>
+  <p>Any version/revision numbers that may be printed on your wireless network
+ devices or their packaging. These can be especially helpful, so look
+ carefully.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Anything on the driver disc that identifies either the device itself, its "firmware" version, or the 
components (chipset) it uses.</p>
+  <p>Anything on the driver disc that identifies either the device itself, its
+ "firmware" version, or the components (chipset) it uses.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
-<p>If possible, try to get access to an alternative working internet connection so that you can download 
software and drivers if necessary. (Plugging your computer directly into the router with an Ethernet network 
cable is one way of providing this, but only plug it in when you need to.)</p>
+<p>If possible, try to get access to an alternative working internet connection
+ so that you can download software and drivers if necessary. (Plugging your
+ computer directly into the router with an Ethernet network cable is one way of
+ providing this, but only plug it in when you need to.)</p>
 
 <p>Once you have as many of these items as possible, click <gui>Next</gui>.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page 
b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
index fd791df..66b5d5e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check.page
@@ -1,10 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check">
+
   <info>
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-hardware-info"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting"/>
+
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-03-05" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -12,39 +16,62 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Make sure that simple network settings are correct and prepare for the next few troubleshooting 
steps.</desc>
+    <desc>Make sure that simple network settings are correct and prepare for the
+    next few troubleshooting steps.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Wireless network troubleshooter</title>
 <subtitle>Perform an initial connection check</subtitle>
 
-<p>In this step you will check some basic information about your wireless network connection. This is to 
make sure that your networking problem isn't caused by a relatively simple issue, like the wireless 
connection being turned off, and to prepare for the next few troubleshooting steps.</p>
+<p>In this step you will check some basic information about your wireless
+ network connection. This is to make sure that your networking problem isn't
+ caused by a relatively simple issue, like the wireless connection being turned
+ off, and to prepare for the next few troubleshooting steps.</p>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-  <p>Make sure that your laptop is not connected to a <em>wired</em> internet connection.</p>
+  <p>Make sure that your laptop is not connected to a <em>wired</em> internet
+ connection.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>If you have an external wireless adapter (such as a USB adapter, or a PCMCIA card that plugs into your 
laptop), make sure that it is firmly inserted into the proper slot on your computer.</p>
+  <p>If you have an external wireless adapter (such as a USB adapter, or a
+ PCMCIA card that plugs into your laptop), make sure that it is firmly inserted
+ into the proper slot on your computer.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>If your wireless card is <em>inside</em> your computer, make sure that the wireless switch is turned on 
(if it has one). Laptops often have wireless switches that you can toggle by pressing a combination of 
keyboard keys.</p>
+  <p>If your wireless card is <em>inside</em> your computer, make sure that the
+ wireless switch is turned on (if it has one). Laptops often have wireless
+ switches that you can toggle by pressing a combination of keyboard keys.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
-  <p>Click the network icon and make sure that <gui>Wireless</gui> is set to ON. You should also check that 
<link xref="net-wireless-airplane">Airplane Mode is not switched on</link>.</p>
+  <p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>,
+ then select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>. Make sure that <gui>Wi-Fi</gui> is set
+ to <gui>ON</gui>. You should also check that
+ <link xref="net-wireless-airplane">Airplane Mode is not switched on</link>.</p>
  </item>
  <item>
   <p>Open the Terminal, type <cmd>nm-tool</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
-  <p>This will display information about your network hardware and connection status. Look down the list of 
information and see if there is a section related to the wireless network adapter. The information for each 
network device is separated by a row of dashes. If you find the line <code>State: Connected</code> in the 
section for your wireless adapter, it means that it is working and connected to your wireless router.</p>
+  <p>This will display information about your network hardware and connection
+ status. Look down the list of information and see if there is a section
+ related to the wireless network adapter. The information for each network
+ device is separated by a row of dashes. If you find the line
+ <code>State: Connected</code> in the section for your wireless adapter, it
+ means that it is working and connected to your wireless router.</p>
  </item>
 </steps>
 
-<p>If you are connected to your wireless router, but you still cannot access the internet, your router may 
not be set up correctly, or your Internet Service Provider (ISP) maybe experiencing some technical problems. 
Review your router and ISP setup guides to make sure the settings are correct, or contact your ISP for 
support.</p>
+<p>If you are connected to your wireless router, but you still cannot access the
+ internet, your router may not be set up correctly, or your Internet Service
+ Provider (ISP) maybe experiencing some technical problems. Review your router
+ and ISP setup guides to make sure the settings are correct, or contact your
+ ISP for support.</p>
 
-<p>If the information from <cmd>nm-tool</cmd> did not indicate that you were connected to the network, click 
<gui>Next</gui> to proceed to the next portion of the troubleshooting guide.</p>
+<p>If the information from <cmd>nm-tool</cmd> did not indicate that you were
+ connected to the network, click <gui>Next</gui> to proceed to the next portion
+ of the troubleshooting guide.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
index 3100314..7284ad6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-troubleshooting.page
@@ -1,11 +1,14 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="net-wireless-troubleshooting">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless" group="first"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="hardware#problems" group="first"/>
     <link type="next" xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting-initial-check"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Contributors to the Ubuntu documentation wiki</name>
@@ -13,7 +16,7 @@
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>Identify and fix problems with wireless connections</desc>
@@ -22,9 +25,12 @@
 
 <title>Wireless network troubleshooter</title>
 
-<p>This is a step-by step troubleshooting guide to help you identify and fix wireless problems. If you 
cannot connect to a wireless network for some reason, try following the instructions here.</p>
+<p>This is a step-by step troubleshooting guide to help you identify and fix
+ wireless problems. If you cannot connect to a wireless network for some reason,
+ try following the instructions here.</p>
 
-<p>We will proceed through the following steps to get your computer connected to the internet:</p>
+<p>We will proceed through the following steps to get your computer connected to
+ the internet:</p>
   <list style="numbered compact">
     <item><p>Performing an initial check</p></item>
     <item><p>Gathering information about your hardware</p></item>
@@ -32,12 +38,18 @@
     <item><p>Attempting to create a connection to your wireless router</p></item>
     <item><p>Performing a check of your modem and router</p></item>
   </list>
-  <p>To get started, click on the <em>Next</em> link at the top right of the page. This link, and others 
like it on following pages, will take you through each step in the guide.</p>
+  <p>To get started, click on the <em>Next</em> link at the top right of the
+ page. This link, and others like it on following pages, will take you through
+ each step in the guide.</p>
 
 <note>
  <title>Using the command line</title>
- <p>Some of the instructions in this guide ask you to type commands into the <em>command line</em> 
(Terminal). You can find the Terminal application in the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
- <p>If you are not familiar with using a command line, don't worry - this guide will direct you at each 
step. All you need to remember is that commands are case-sensitive (so you must type them <em>exactly</em> as 
they appear here), and to press <key>Enter</key> after typing each command to run it.</p>
+ <p>Some of the instructions in this guide ask you to type commands into the
+ <em>command line</em> (Terminal). You can find the Terminal application in the <gui>Activities</gui> 
overview.</p>
+ <p>If you are not familiar with using a command line, don't worry - this guide
+ will direct you at each step. All you need to remember is that commands are
+ case-sensitive (so you must type them <em>exactly</em> as they appear here),
+ and to press <key>Enter</key> after typing each command to run it.</p>
 </note>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
index b2ca08a..ca4482d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-wepwpa.page
@@ -1,14 +1,17 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
+      xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its";
       type="topic" style="tip"
       id="net-wireless-wepwpa">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
-      <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
+      <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
     <desc>WEP and WPA are ways of encrypting data on wireless networks.</desc>
@@ -17,8 +20,17 @@
 
 <title>What do WEP and WPA mean?</title>
 
-<p>WEP and WPA (along with WPA2) are names for different encryption tools used to secure your wireless 
connection. Encryption scrambles the network connection so that no one can "listen in" to it and look at 
which web pages you are viewing, for example. WEP stands for <em>Wired Equivalent Privacy</em>, and WPA 
stands for <em>Wireless Protected Access</em>. WPA2 is the second version of the WPA standard.</p>
+<p>WEP and WPA (along with WPA2) are names for different encryption tools used
+ to secure your wireless connection. Encryption scrambles the network
+ connection so that no one can "listen in" to it and look at which web pages
+ you are viewing, for example. WEP stands for <em>Wired Equivalent Privacy</em>,
+ and WPA stands for <em>Wireless Protected Access</em>. WPA2 is the second
+ version of the WPA standard.</p>
 
-<p>Using <em>some</em> encryption is always better than using none, but WEP is the least secure of these 
standards, and you should not use it if you can avoid it. WPA2 is the most secure of the three. If your 
wireless card and router support WPA2, that is what you should use when setting up your wireless network.</p>
+<p>Using <em>some</em> encryption is always better than using none, but WEP is
+ the least secure of these standards, and you should not use it if you can avoid
+ it. WPA2 is the most secure of the three. If your wireless card and router
+ support WPA2, that is what you should use when setting up your wireless
+ network.</p>
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>


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