[gnome-getting-started-docs] Update text for 3.10
- From: Petr Kovář <pmkovar src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-getting-started-docs] Update text for 3.10
- Date: Mon, 14 Oct 2013 17:29:20 +0000 (UTC)
commit cb36e4bd53ac64f351b96b766e0481e71cbe23b1
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date: Mon Oct 14 19:28:40 2013 +0200
Update text for 3.10
gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page | 37 +++++++++++------------
gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page | 15 +++++----
gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page | 9 ++---
gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page | 14 ++++----
4 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index b978f04..ac0f280 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -41,7 +41,8 @@
<tt:p>Select the <gui>Date & Time Settings</gui> item.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="13s" end="16s">
- <tt:p>Click on your location on the map.</tt:p>
+ <tt:p>Click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item, and then click on your
+ location on the map.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="16s" end="20s">
<tt:p>You can adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to
@@ -64,25 +65,23 @@
<title>Change the date, time and timezone</title>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click the clock on the top bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>Select the <gui>Date & Time Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
- <item>
-
- <comment>
- <cite date="2013-06-20">pmkovar</cite>
- <p>Changing timezone hopefully won't require authorization.</p>
- </comment>
-
- <p>You may need to click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button and type the
- administrator's password.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click on your location on the map.</p>
- <p>This selects your current city, which you can also see and change in the
- drop-down list below the map.</p></item>
- <item><p>On the right-hand side of the window, you can adjust the date and
- time by clicking on the arrows to choose the hour, minute, and year.</p>
+ <item><p>Click the clock on the top bar and select the <gui>Date & Time
+ Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> item is switched
+ off, and then click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item below.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click on your location on the map. This selects your current city,
+ which you can also search for in the
+ search box above the map.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &
+ Time Settings</gui> window.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Date & Time</gui> item is
+ switched off, and then click the <gui>Date & Time</gui> item below to
+ open the <gui>Date & Time</gui> window. There you can adjust your date
+ and time settings by clicking on the <gui>+</gui> or <gui>-</gui> buttons.</p>
</item>
- <item><p>Close the window by clicking the cross at the top-right corner of
- the window.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &
+ Time Settings</gui> window, and then close that window by clicking the
+ cross at the top-right corner of that window.</p></item>
</steps>
<!-- FIXME:
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
index 230daa5..693c131 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
@@ -30,16 +30,17 @@
<tt:p>Changing Wallpaper</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="6s" end="9s">
- <tt:p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</tt:p>
+ <tt:p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+ the settings button.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="10s" end="12s">
<tt:p>Select <gui>Background</gui>.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="12s" end="13s">
- <tt:p>Click the image of your current wallpaper.</tt:p>
+ <tt:p>Click the current background image.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="13s" end="16s">
- <tt:p>Click the background image that you want to use.</tt:p>
+ <tt:p>Click the background image you want to use.</tt:p>
</tt:div>
<tt:div begin="16s" end="18s">
<tt:p>Click the <gui>Select</gui> button.</tt:p>
@@ -56,12 +57,12 @@
<title>Change the wallpaper</title>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
- </p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+ the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
<item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Background</gui>.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click the image of your current wallpaper in the center of the
+ <item><p>Click the current background image on the left side of the
<gui>Background</gui> window.</p></item>
- <item><p>Click the background image that you want to use.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the background image you want to use.</p></item>
<item><p>Click the <gui>Select</gui> button.</p></item>
<item><p>Close the <gui>Background</gui> window by clicking the cross at
the top-right corner of the window.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
index d56eaa4..199797e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
@@ -24,16 +24,15 @@
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
<steps>
- <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>Select the <gui>Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
</steps>
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-goa2.svg" width="100%" />
<steps style="continues">
- <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.
- </p></item>
- <item><p>Click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
+ <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>, then
+ click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
</steps>
<note><p>If you have set up an online account before, you can add another
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
index 377109b..91255af 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
@@ -24,11 +24,11 @@
<steps>
<item><p>Open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> by pressing the
- <key href="help:gnome-help/keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p></item>
- <item><p>Start typing to search. Results matching what you have typed will
- appear as you type.</p></item>
- <item><p>The first result is always highlighted and shown at the top. Press
- <key>Enter</key> to switch to the first highlighted result.</p></item>
+ <key href="help:gnome-help/keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key. Start typing
+ to search.</p>
+ <p>Results matching what you have typed will appear as you type. The first
+ result is always highlighted and shown at the top.</p>
+ <p>Press <key>Enter</key> to switch to the first highlighted result.</p></item>
</steps>
<media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-search2.svg" width="100%" />
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@
<p>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</p>
<steps>
- <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
- <item><p>Select the <gui>Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+ the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
<item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Search</gui>.</p></item>
<item><p>In the list of search locations, click the <gui>ON/OFF</gui>
switch next to the search location you want to enable or disable.</p>
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