[gnome-getting-started-docs] Update text for 3.10



commit cb36e4bd53ac64f351b96b766e0481e71cbe23b1
Author: Petr Kovar <pkovar redhat com>
Date:   Mon Oct 14 19:28:40 2013 +0200

    Update text for 3.10

 gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page |   37 +++++++++++------------
 gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page          |   15 +++++----
 gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page   |    9 ++---
 gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page         |   14 ++++----
 4 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
index b978f04..ac0f280 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-date-time-timezone.page
@@ -41,7 +41,8 @@
            <tt:p>Select the <gui>Date &amp; Time Settings</gui> item.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="13s" end="16s">
-           <tt:p>Click on your location on the map.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item, and then click on your
+           location on the map.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="16s" end="20s">
            <tt:p>You can adjust the date and time by clicking on the arrows to
@@ -64,25 +65,23 @@
     <title>Change the date, time and timezone</title>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click the clock on the top bar.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Select the <gui>Date &amp; Time Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
-    <item>
-    
-    <comment>
-    <cite date="2013-06-20">pmkovar</cite>
-    <p>Changing timezone hopefully won't require authorization.</p>
-    </comment>
-
-    <p>You may need to click the <gui>Unlock</gui> button and type the
-     administrator's password.</p></item>
-    <item><p>Click on your location on the map.</p>
-    <p>This selects your current city, which you can also see and change in the
-     drop-down list below the map.</p></item>
-    <item><p>On the right-hand side of the window, you can adjust the date and
-     time by clicking on the arrows to choose the hour, minute, and year.</p>
+    <item><p>Click the clock on the top bar and select the <gui>Date &amp; Time
+     Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Time Zone</gui> item is switched
+     off, and then click the <gui>Time Zone</gui> item below.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click on your location on the map. This selects your current city,
+     which you can also search for in the
+     search box above the map.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
+     Time Settings</gui> window.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Make sure that the <gui>Automatic Date &amp; Time</gui> item is
+     switched off, and then click the <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> item below to
+     open the <gui>Date &amp; Time</gui> window. There you can adjust your date
+     and time settings by clicking on the <gui>+</gui> or <gui>-</gui> buttons.</p>
      </item>
-    <item><p>Close the window by clicking the cross at the top-right corner of
-     the window.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click the <gui>Close</gui> button to go back to the <gui>Date &amp;
+     Time Settings</gui> window, and then close that window by clicking the
+     cross at the top-right corner of that window.</p></item>
   </steps>
 
   <!-- FIXME: 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
index 230daa5..693c131 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-change-wallpaper.page
@@ -30,16 +30,17 @@
            <tt:p>Changing Wallpaper</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="6s" end="9s">
-           <tt:p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+           the settings button.</tt:p>
            </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="10s" end="12s">
            <tt:p>Select <gui>Background</gui>.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="12s" end="13s">
-           <tt:p>Click the image of your current wallpaper.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the current background image.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="13s" end="16s">
-           <tt:p>Click the background image that you want to use.</tt:p>
+           <tt:p>Click the background image you want to use.</tt:p>
          </tt:div>
          <tt:div begin="16s" end="18s">
            <tt:p>Click the <gui>Select</gui> button.</tt:p>
@@ -56,12 +57,12 @@
     <title>Change the wallpaper</title>
     
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>Settings</gui>.
-      </p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+      the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
       <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Background</gui>.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Click the image of your current wallpaper in the center of the
+      <item><p>Click the current background image on the left side of the
       <gui>Background</gui> window.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Click the background image that you want to use.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the background image you want to use.</p></item>
       <item><p>Click the <gui>Select</gui> button.</p></item>
       <item><p>Close the <gui>Background</gui> window by clicking the cross at
       the top-right corner of the window.</p></item>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
index d56eaa4..199797e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-connect-online-accounts.page
@@ -24,16 +24,15 @@
     <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-goa1.svg" width="100%" />
 
     <steps>
-      <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Select the <gui>Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Press the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
     </steps>
        
     <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-goa2.svg" width="100%" />
     
     <steps style="continues">
-      <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.
-      </p></item>
-      <item><p>Click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
+      <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Online Accounts</gui>, then
+      click on the <gui>Add an online account</gui> button.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
     <note><p>If you have set up an online account before, you can add another
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
index 377109b..91255af 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/gs-use-system-search.page
@@ -24,11 +24,11 @@
     
     <steps>
     <item><p>Open the <gui>Activities Overview</gui> by pressing the
-    <key href="help:gnome-help/keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key.</p></item>
-     <item><p>Start typing to search. Results matching what you have typed will
-      appear as you type.</p></item>
-     <item><p>The first result is always highlighted and shown at the top. Press
-     <key>Enter</key> to switch to the first highlighted result.</p></item>
+    <key href="help:gnome-help/keyboard-key-super">Super</key> key. Start typing
+    to search.</p>
+    <p>Results matching what you have typed will appear as you type. The first
+    result is always highlighted and shown at the top.</p>
+    <p>Press <key>Enter</key> to switch to the first highlighted result.</p></item>
     </steps>
     
     <media type="image" its:translate="no" src="gs-search2.svg" width="100%" />
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@
       <p>To customize what is displayed in the search results:</p>
 
       <steps>
-        <item><p>Click your name on the top bar.</p></item>
-        <item><p>Select the <gui>Settings</gui> item.</p></item>
+        <item><p>Click the system menu on the right side of the top bar and press
+         the settings button at the bottom of the menu.</p></item>
         <item><p>From the list of items, select <gui>Search</gui>.</p></item>
         <item><p>In the list of search locations, click the <gui>ON/OFF</gui>
          switch next to the search location you want to enable or disable.</p>


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