[gnome-user-docs] performed review and update of session-fingerprint instructions
- From: Jim Campbell <jcampbell src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] performed review and update of session-fingerprint instructions
- Date: Mon, 16 Jun 2014 23:49:37 +0000 (UTC)
commit 41890598af00aaeffb70b255029572042fb16ed4
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date: Mon Jun 16 19:49:20 2014 -0400
performed review and update of session-fingerprint instructions
gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page | 19 ++++++++++++-------
1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
index d0ed24b..8949804 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
<revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-16" status="candidate"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-16" status="final"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -24,6 +24,11 @@
<email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
<years>2013</years>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">jcampbell gnome org</email>
+ <years>2014</years>
+ </credit>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -66,16 +71,16 @@
</item>
<item>
<p>Select the finger that you want to use for the fingerprint, then
- <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p>
+ <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Follow the instructions in the dialog and swipe your finger at
- <em>moderate speed</em> over your fingerprint reader. You should need to
- swipe your finger at least five times. Once the computer has a good
- record of your fingerprint, you will see a <gui>Done!</gui> message.</p>
+ <p>Follow the instructions in the dialog and swipe your finger at a
+ <em>moderate speed</em> over your fingerprint reader. Once the computer
+ has a good record of your fingerprint, you will see a <gui>Done!</gui>
+ message.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Select <gui>Continue</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
+ <p>Select <gui>Next</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
your fingerprint was saved successfully. Select <gui>Close</gui> to
finish.</p>
</item>
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