[gnome-user-docs] performed review and update of session-fingerprint instructions



commit 41890598af00aaeffb70b255029572042fb16ed4
Author: Jim Campbell <jcampbell gnome org>
Date:   Mon Jun 16 19:49:20 2014 -0400

    performed review and update of session-fingerprint instructions

 gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page |   19 ++++++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
index d0ed24b..8949804 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/session-fingerprint.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-03" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-16" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-06-16" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -24,6 +24,11 @@
       <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
       <years>2013</years>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Jim Campbell</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">jcampbell gnome org</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -66,16 +71,16 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the finger that you want to use for the fingerprint, then
-      <gui style="button">Continue</gui>.</p>
+      <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Follow the instructions in the dialog and swipe your finger at
-      <em>moderate speed</em> over your fingerprint reader. You should need to
-      swipe your finger at least five times. Once the computer has a good
-      record of your fingerprint, you will see a <gui>Done!</gui> message.</p>
+      <p>Follow the instructions in the dialog and swipe your finger at a
+      <em>moderate speed</em> over your fingerprint reader. Once the computer
+      has a good record of your fingerprint, you will see a <gui>Done!</gui>
+      message.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select <gui>Continue</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
+      <p>Select <gui>Next</gui>. You will see a confirmation message that
       your fingerprint was saved successfully. Select <gui>Close</gui> to
       finish.</p>
     </item>


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