[gnome-user-docs] Improve random net-wireless-find desc and review

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 167a5a2ae7595fe13b06d7c245035f0bf165e826
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 10 23:41:38 2014 +0000

    Improve random net-wireless-find desc and review
    
    Thanks to Rudolfs for pointing out on IRC

 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page |   31 ++++++++++++++++---------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
index 14d52b4..49ede4f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-find.page
@@ -9,22 +9,24 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="net-wireless-hidden"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.10" version="0.2" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.12" date="2014-03-10" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email its:translate="no">gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, and other places to look.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
+
+    <desc>The wireless could be turned off or broken, or you may be trying to
+    connect to a hidden network.</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>I can't see my wireless network in the list</title>
 
-<p>There are a number of reasons why you might not be able to see your wireless
- network on the list of networks which appears when you click the network icon
- on the top bar.</p>
+  <p>There are a number of reasons why you might not be able to see your
+  wireless network on the list of available networks from the system menu.</p>
 
 <list>
  <item>
@@ -32,26 +34,25 @@
   turned off, or it <link xref="net-wireless-troubleshooting">may not be
   working properly</link>. Make sure it is turned on.</p>
  </item>
-
- <item>
-  <p>If there are lots of wireless networks nearby, the network you are looking
-  for might not be on the first page of the list. If this is the case, look at
-  the bottom of the list for an arrow pointing towards the right and hover your
-  mouse over it to display the rest of the wireless networks.</p>
- </item>
-
+<!-- Does anyone have lots of wireless networks to test this? Pretty sure it's
+     no longer correct.
+  <item>
+    <p>If there are lots of wireless networks nearby, the network you are
+    looking for might not be on the first page of the list. If this is the
+    case, look at the bottom of the list for an arrow pointing towards the
+    right and hover your mouse over it to display the rest of the wireless
+    networks.</p>
+  </item>-->
  <item>
   <p>You could be out of range of the network. Try moving closer to the
   wireless base station/router and see if the network appears in the list after
   a while.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
   <p>The list of wireless networks takes time to update. If you have just
   turned on your computer or moved to a different location, wait for a minute
   or so and then check if the network has appeared in the list.</p>
  </item>
-
  <item>
   <p>The network could be hidden. You need to
   <link xref="net-wireless-hidden">connect in a different way</link> if it is a