[seahorse/wip/userdocs: 127/423] docs: rm ssh-login page. started create-ssh-key.page. edited pub-private and connect-other-comp.
- From: Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [seahorse/wip/userdocs: 127/423] docs: rm ssh-login page. started create-ssh-key.page. edited pub-private and connect-other-comp.
- Date: Sun, 16 Mar 2014 16:46:00 +0000 (UTC)
commit b895db69cd06e67e81d896e5470f5cc7b6925d85
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date: Mon Aug 12 12:31:30 2013 -0500
docs: rm ssh-login page. started create-ssh-key.page. edited pub-private and connect-other-comp.
- The ssh-login.page would have been the same as the instructions for connecting to another computer
- The create-ssh-key.page was just a stub. It's still incomplete, but most of it is fleshed-out.
- I made some style corrections to the what-diff-private-public.page file
- Started work on the connect-other-computers file.
help/C/connect-other-computer.page | 10 +++++-
help/C/create-ssh-key.page | 49 +++++++++++++++++++++++----------
help/C/ssh-login.page | 39 ---------------------------
help/C/what-diff-private-public.page | 12 ++++----
4 files changed, 48 insertions(+), 62 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/connect-other-computer.page b/help/C/connect-other-computer.page
index 8c0f979..c76d021 100644
--- a/help/C/connect-other-computer.page
+++ b/help/C/connect-other-computer.page
@@ -14,13 +14,19 @@
<email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
</credit>
- <desc>Use SSH keys to connect to another computer without entering a
+ <credit> type="author">
+ <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
+ <email its:translate="no">aruna evam gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
+
+ <desc>Use SSH keys to log in to another computer without entering a
password.</desc>
</info>
<title>Connect to other computers</title>
- <p>Short introductory text...</p>
+ <p>You can use <app>Passwords and Keys</app> to install your SSH key onto a
+remote computer. If the other computer is configured p</p>
<steps>
<item><p>First step...</p></item>
diff --git a/help/C/create-ssh-key.page b/help/C/create-ssh-key.page
index 19f97ad..5d06b84 100644
--- a/help/C/create-ssh-key.page
+++ b/help/C/create-ssh-key.page
@@ -1,18 +1,19 @@
<page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/"
xmlns:its="http://www.w3.org/2005/11/its"
+ xmlns:ui = "http://projectmallard.org/ui/1.0/"
type="topic" style="task"
id="create-ssh-key">
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#ssh-keys"/>
- <revision version="0.1" date="2011-06-17" status="stub"/>
+ <revision version="0.8" date="2013-08-12" status="incomplete"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Jim Campbell</name>
<email its:translate="no">jwcampbell gmail com</email>
- <years>2011</years>
+ <years>2013</years>
</credit>
<desc>Create SSH keys to login to other computers.</desc>
@@ -20,18 +21,36 @@
<title>Create a new SSH key</title>
- <comment>
- <cite date="2011-06-17" href="mailto:jwcampbell gmail com">Jim Campbell</cite>
- <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
- the reader will be able to....</p>
- </comment>
-
- <p>Short introductory text...</p>
-
- <steps>
- <item><p>First step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Second step...</p></item>
- <item><p>Third step...</p></item>
- </steps>
+ <p>An SSH key will help you to create a secure connection between computers.
+ Creating an SSH key creates both a <em>Public</em> and a <em>Private</em>
+ key. Here is how to create a new key:</p>
+
+ <steps>
+ <item><p>Click <guiseq><gui>File</gui><gui>New</gui></guiseq>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Select <gui>Secure Shell Key</gui> and then click
+ <gui>Continue</gui>.</p></item>
+ <item><p>Enter a description for the key. The key description will help
+ you to identify the key later. For example, you could enter today's date,
+ something about how the key will be used, or the server name on which you
+ intend to install the key. The description field is optional, and how you
+ describe the key is entirely up to you.</p></item>
+ <item><p>You can change default settings for encryption type or key
+ strength by expanding the Advanced key options panel.</p></item>
+ </steps>
+
+ <p>At this point, you can either just create your key, or create your key
+ and set it up on a remote server.</p>
+
+ <section id="ssh-just-create-key" ui:expanded="true">
+ <title>Just create your key</title>
+ <p>Instructions for just creating keys.</p>
+
+ </section>
+
+ <section id="ssh-create-key-and-set-up" ui:expanded="false">
+ <title>Create your key and install it on a remote computer</title>
+ <p>Instructions to create it and set it up.</p>
+
+ </section>
</page>
diff --git a/help/C/what-diff-private-public.page b/help/C/what-diff-private-public.page
index bebd88e..82d3983 100644
--- a/help/C/what-diff-private-public.page
+++ b/help/C/what-diff-private-public.page
@@ -27,18 +27,18 @@
<em>Private Key</em> as being like a key that unlocks the padlock.</p>
<p>Let's use an example to see how this works. Imagine that you want your
- friends to send you a secret message in a locked box. You could give each
+ friends to use a locked box to send you a secret message. You could give each
of your friends a box and a padlock, but only you would have the key that
unlocks the padlocks.</p>
<p>Each friend could place their message into their box, and lock the box.
- They could send you their locked box in the mail, and you could unlock all
- of the boxes that you receive with your key.</p>
+ They could send you their locked box in the mail, and you could use your key
+ to unlock all of the boxes that you receive.</p>
<p>This is similar to how a <em>Public Key</em> and a <em>Private Key</em>
- work. Like the padlock, you can freely give out your <em>Public Key</em>. This
- will make it easy for anyone to securely encrypt, or lock, a message that
- they want to send to you. Similarly, you will want to keep your
+ work. Like the padlock, you can freely give out your <em>Public Key</em>.
+ This will make it easy for anyone to securely encrypt, or lock, a message
+ that they want to send to you. Similarly, you will want to keep your
<em>Private Key</em> safe. The <em>Private Key</em> is what allows you to
decrypt, or unlock, the secure messages that you receive.</p>
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